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LeoffLv63yr
2021-10-22 22:39

Well, I mean, wet teen dreams. I will never believe in my life that this work is written by an adult ... The only plus is no harem, everything else is just fantasy, on the topic of fantasy. I read about 3-4 years ago, a Chinese novel. There, the main character, falls into the past and ... In the 2nd chapter, he is looking for Bill Gates * (the most fantastic thing is he finds him and makes an appointment) and sells him, his own Windows. In chapter 15, he is already a billionaire, in one hand all the girls he knows, in the other pathetic hooligans. There were many chapters, but I did not read any further. Everything is slower here, but I have already reached Jobs. And an 11 year old child knows the future, but the author says that it is the mind. If it was 1 time, I would agree, but not 10 times every day ... There are many more, but everything will not fit into 1 comment. So I'll leave my 3 here, I think deservedly so. 5 points for quality, 5 for updates, 2 for a story, 2 for a character, 1 for a world. Everything is as I saw this work. No hate, just my objective assessment, well, for someone subjective.

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MisterImmortalAuthor

This IS a fantasy world, bro. Harry was 12 when he killed a Basilisk. Well, MC here has the buff of Merlin and Arthur. Though I agree with your other worlds. The fic is too long. But I don't want to rush it and end it fast, It feels wrong doing that.

Worn_out_byLv15

Then make it intresting with interactions oh wait

MisterImmortal:This IS a fantasy world, bro. Harry was 12 when he killed a Basilisk. Well, MC here has the buff of Merlin and Arthur. Though I agree with your other worlds. The fic is too long. But I don't want to rush it and end it fast, It feels wrong doing that.
SrCuervoLv4

Hi, I'm writing an HP Fanfaction, it would help me a lot if you read it and comment what you think, you can find it on my profile or look for it as: Harry Potter: Narnia and the World Hidden in a Closet.

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