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hikki_08
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2021-11-24 16:48

the story is becoming very boring a kid's drama of winning everything in life if mc isn't a kid, it would be great but it is nonsense when 11 yr old little boy is acting like a very mature adult man the author should have aged the mc a little bit more

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MisterImmortal
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Agreed.

Klaymore
KlaymoreLv4

that's the downfall of every single fanfiction in this site. All of them have 12 year old demigods. Or straight up gods. Authors are very inexperienced and don't know how to pace progression and just throw all the powerups they can think of at the MCs all at once. So many good settings and premises ruined by that.

Worn_out_by
Worn_out_byLv15

From what I have seen it’s the Harry Potter fics more than anything everyone author gets hung up on the school plot and even when they do they don’t make it intresting by adding romance and good side characters (friends that sort of people) not to mention things like a break in the school year

Klaymore:that's the downfall of every single fanfiction in this site. All of them have 12 year old demigods. Or straight up gods. Authors are very inexperienced and don't know how to pace progression and just throw all the powerups they can think of at the MCs all at once. So many good settings and premises ruined by that.
esperomejorar
esperomejorarLv1

VE A LEER GENERO DRAMA.

SrCuervo
SrCuervoLv4

Hi, I'm writing an HP Fanfaction, it would help me a lot if you read it and comment what you think, you can find it on my profile or look for it as: Harry Potter: Narnia and the World Hidden in a Closet.

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