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Na1gelLv44yr
2021-02-21 00:51

hmm its good but it makes no sense... i mean he is in the time of the second war or is it third ? dunno don't really Mathers but what our mc is doing is writing the Naruto manga we all have seen .. and printing it out and letting all off Konoha look at it lol so yet again i most ask is this mc an bonafide idiot ? things will come up and people will be like " wait didn't i just read this shit in the manga back in Konoha ?" people will start to suspect that something is wrong.. and thats just fact i find it fucking weird but enough about that lets go over to his choice´s with the system thingy he have ... he is from kuruma clan so he has a weak body etc etc but the dude does not fix his body up with the system atm he have 10 physical and 50 mental makes no frickin sense why he would willingly let himself have a weak ass body yet the dude just want to sit and write .. he knows what´s happening yet he wont improve himself its frustrating and annoying at the same time .. but the story is ok i guess ?

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ChenXian
ChenXianLv14

It's easier to write in order to get points, after all, from what I understand the kurama clan also gets diminished returns from training, furthermore, the more he writes the more people will get hooked and read more, meaning more points, besides, is mere existence already completely changed the future, what he has to be careful about are things that either will happen in the extremely near future, which do not appear much in the beginning of the manga, or end really, or things that he should have no knowledge about, and even if 20 years later a guy is born and becomes famous and has the same name has someone in the manga, as long as it becomes famous that won't be much of a problem

Herach
HerachLv5

The time period is clearly set. He's the same age as the Sannin and their genin team was formed by the end of the first shinobi war. The author has moved people around a lot, such as Sakumo who's a bit older, but they will probably still be in that area. The Sannin got their name during the second war after all. And think of it like this. Since people have read it, it won't happen in the same way. And if some things do then people will either assume it was inspired (such as how they name their kids etc.) or that since a Kurama wrote it, it came true. What's to say he didn't create a genjutsu so strong it affected real life. That's what they're known for after all.

Lize
LizeLv13

ah.. no.. just continue reading it.. for me author did a good job solving that problem..

isotobe
isotobeLv1

Actually I think author did a good job because the mc is set in the time period of the 3 Sannins and the MC is the friends with nearly all the cast set in the 2nd Shinobi War so they think he would have just taken a liking to there personality and when the real Naruto canon starts he will be powerful. Am I the only one????????????

Lotus79
Lotus79Lv4

he mean, if you ad 1 poin in 1 poin vitality he can become the strongest, he can get 100 point eazily what if he put 1000 poin in vitality

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