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the description is rather common so most wouldn't find this fic interesting at first, but I'll be making another overview so yall know what you're heading into. no spoilers (not much) atleast. so the main is an art student reborn in naruto world, nothing much at first, the system allows him to gain points from letting people read his naruto manga, the stronger the person, the more points he gets, and so that's the part that makes him the ( OP?) protagonist. BUT here's the catch, this fanfic is based in the time wayy before naruto was born, the main gets to interact with people like the sannins even orochimaru before he turned, ya know, pedophile, and the uzumaki clan before they got eradicated. thanks to the settings, we get to see many of the author's OC making this unique in it's own way, and since naruto and others in the canon didn't exist yet, no one expects the MC's manga to be somekind of predictions. you can't see where this is going, this, my fellow reader, is an unpredictable fanfic, like time travelling and butterfly effects type of unpredictability along with "restaurant in another world" and "black tech internet cafe" vibe. so far this is quite an interesting and relaxing read. there's hardly any grammatical mistakes. MC's the lazy type and his chemistry with other character is surprisingly good.

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hmm its good but it makes no sense... i mean he is in the time of the second war or is it third ? dunno don't really Mathers but what our mc is doing is writing the Naruto manga we all have seen .. and printing it out and letting all off Konoha look at it lol so yet again i most ask is this mc an bonafide idiot ? things will come up and people will be like " wait didn't i just read this shit in the manga back in Konoha ?" people will start to suspect that something is wrong.. and thats just fact i find it fucking weird but enough about that lets go over to his choice´s with the system thingy he have ... he is from kuruma clan so he has a weak body etc etc but the dude does not fix his body up with the system atm he have 10 physical and 50 mental makes no frickin sense why he would willingly let himself have a weak ass body yet the dude just want to sit and write .. he knows what´s happening yet he wont improve himself its frustrating and annoying at the same time .. but the story is ok i guess ?

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While it has potential, I couldn't get very far with it at all. The grammar and spelling just wasn't up to par and throws it off entirely, to the point where i couldn't focus on the story at all.

the beginning was promising, a year ago I read about 60 chapters and postponed this fic to read a couple hundred chapters in one gulp. And today I decided to read it, and I'm disappointed. the author has let all the potential down the drain. the author crossed out the romantic line (why give hope at the very beginning and take it away at the end!?). ms did not develop as a person in any way, just a lazy infusoria with the system. there was no development of other characters, only their killing and falling as personalities. the ending was completely 👎 and uninteresting, it ended in a hurry and boring. this is the most disappointing fan fiction in my life. (((

I give this novel 9/10 There is no harem – this is + MS becomes strong smoothly – this is also + but there is one minus – there is no romance, so I bet 4.8