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Devil_Hex
Devil_HexLv53yr
2021-04-01 04:25

It's decent. MC transmigrates into Kakashi and fuses with his soul. Story is written well, but lots of issues with the characters, especially MC and Hiruzen. MC : despite having the knowledge of future events and the characters, still, at times, acts like he doesn't know anything. He freaking thinks that Danzo won't kill a leaf shinobi!! He trusts 3rd a bit too much. And is shown surprised/wondering about a lot of things that are very clear in manga/anime. So it's very inconsistent to see MC using his knowledge in one scene, and act like he doesn't know anything in other. Also for some reason, he decided to write down all his memories from his past life in a freaking book! Pure stupidity (I guess in future someone will steal it to make the enemies stronger). 3rd Hokage : He is shown to be even lamer than in canon. Danzo sent root to assassinate him? Okay, no need to do anything or even mention it to Danzo. Danzo is still maintaining root? Alright, no worries. Danzo tried to kill Kakashi? That's okay, I won't ever bring it up or take any action.

Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi

Iampoorguy
4.5
827 Chs

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DAOIST_SUPREME
DAOIST_SUPREMELv4

Orochimaru stole the book😩

3yr
87
Mastaaah
MastaaahLv2

Wut? Are you serious? Dropped!

DAOIST_SUPREME:Orochimaru stole the book😩
3yr
71
DAOIST_SUPREME
DAOIST_SUPREMELv4

Yes☹

Mastaaah:Wut? Are you serious? Dropped!
3yr
47
SeaBass
SeaBassLv3

Well this is dropped

3yr
37
FanfictionLover2
FanfictionLover2Lv2

Lol

DAOIST_SUPREME:Orochimaru stole the book😩
3yr
17
Ashir_Ahmad
Ashir_AhmadLv4

guess who isn't going to waste their time? it's me

DAOIST_SUPREME:Orochimaru stole the book😩
3yr
51
Ashir_Ahmad
Ashir_AhmadLv4

I mean that's me can't even edit what I said ffs

Ashir_Ahmad:guess who isn't going to waste their time? it's me
3yr
14
TErrOR_HOur
TErrOR_HOurLv2

Book is written in another language which is not available in shinobi world Well there are some lame things but we don't expect everything to be perfect It is still nice one compare to those book in which mc is strongest at the age of 7

2yr
13
Primordial_Saiyan
Primordial_SaiyanLv4

Thanks for the heads up 👍🏼 I'm never reading this fic.

2yr
6
Whit3Tig3R
Whit3Tig3RLv1

Thank you for the heads up

2yr
1
Kingola_
Kingola_Lv4

Did the errors ever get better?

2yr
Devil_Hex
Devil_HexLv5

from other reviews, doesn't seem like it. I dropped this under 100 chapters I think. Don't remember

Kingola_:Did the errors ever get better?
2yr
1
Josh_Tyle122345667
Josh_Tyle122345667Lv1

if nobody stole the book i would have read but now, terrible

1yr
1
Josh_Tyle122345667
Josh_Tyle122345667Lv1

i would consider myself stupid but even i wouln't write everything about every that happens in a book

TErrOR_HOur:Book is written in another language which is not available in shinobi world Well there are some lame things but we don't expect everything to be perfect It is still nice one compare to those book in which mc is strongest at the age of 7
1yr
2
Narako_Koru
Narako_KoruLv1

No am

Ashir_Ahmad:guess who isn't going to waste their time? it's me
10mth
Falljoako_64
Falljoako_64Lv1

Apart from your work, what fanfics do you recommend that are realistic and with a more realistic style? Also, the open endings that you always leave torture me every day and living in Latin America does not allow me to pay.

2mth
Izaiah_Schonebeck
Izaiah_SchonebeckLv4

Devil hex what are you doing here

2mth
1
Daoistcvc5Im
Daoistcvc5ImLv2

Eso tiene bastante, yo creo que tiene demasiado detalles molestos que me quitan la inmersión que antes plantea.

12d
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Mirio_kun
Mirio_kunLv1

Reveal spoiler

3yr

SayaBacaNovel
SayaBacaNovelLv13

Good Novel.. Kakashi is shown to be getting stronger.. And he got no cheat except original memories,, talent and body.. I only hope it won't be dropped..

3yr
jainharshit
jainharshitLv12

ii ike this fanfic as in this kakashi is seen displaying his full potential without being emotional stunned . and background of this story is very good

3yr
DAOIST_SUPREME
DAOIST_SUPREMELv4

At first it was good, but only those who read everything will understand why I put 2 stars☹😣 ................................................................

3yr
Ferro
FerroLv5

Dropped at chapter 166 wich is the latest chapter. Also, the constant asking for money on the AN is cringe when you realize the plot is cheap, but because is naruto with a kakashi mc kinda nicely fleshed out, we ignore it. But after these chapters, common sense went to the trash, cheap dialog and nonsensical actions performed by both the MC and the rest of the cast. I strongly do not recommend reading this, you will get exited, you will enjoy it only to get really disappointed in 160-166 chapters, in wich Danzo lives after crippling shisui and Hiruzen asking Kakashi (wich is sopuposed to be op) to spare him. Also kakashi arrived late knowing the plot beforehand, and on top of that having the hiraishin technique. No, just no. I don't recommend this. On the other hand translation is fairly decent and grammar is okay. Really good job on that side. You know the rest. Peace.

3yr
Evil_Dude
Evil_DudeLv12

well the usual chinese cliches where kakashi become the sandime B*tch and start doing some random deadly mentally ill person would do. like throwing your life for someone else whom you know for 1 day. or throwing your life for so called will of AssHo*le fire. basically your random hero bullshit. or 12 year old mindset of author whom doesn't know how life is Bi*ch and you gotta throw village and friends and moral for so Survival. But no the author want to write Disney land stuff story. I am dropping this. by the way thanks for translation. not my cup of tea and have nice day

3yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

MC is IDIOT [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

3yr
Irysss_Novalin
Irysss_NovalinLv3

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3yr
Slesk
SleskLv13

So I read up to chapter 12 and honestly it's garbage. The only thing going for it was length of the story but a long story does not a good one make and this one is very not good. The thing with the sword in chapter 12, the thing with the the spiritual energy making a sharingan eternal, or even the spiritual side making it evolve into rinnegan despite their evolutions being already explained in canon. There are a bunch of other annoying points I noticed and that was not even a tenth of the way in. So I figured this isn't for me and to drop an honest review of what I felt like. I'm not dissing anyone who likes it but this is clearly not a work I enjoy and I don't see myself picking it up later.

3yr
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