It's decent. MC transmigrates into Kakashi and fuses with his soul. Story is written well, but lots of issues with the characters, especially MC and Hiruzen. MC : despite having the knowledge of future events and the characters, still, at times, acts like he doesn't know anything. He freaking thinks that Danzo won't kill a leaf shinobi!! He trusts 3rd a bit too much. And is shown surprised/wondering about a lot of things that are very clear in manga/anime. So it's very inconsistent to see MC using his knowledge in one scene, and act like he doesn't know anything in other. Also for some reason, he decided to write down all his memories from his past life in a freaking book! Pure stupidity (I guess in future someone will steal it to make the enemies stronger). 3rd Hokage : He is shown to be even lamer than in canon. Danzo sent root to assassinate him? Okay, no need to do anything or even mention it to Danzo. Danzo is still maintaining root? Alright, no worries. Danzo tried to kill Kakashi? That's okay, I won't ever bring it up or take any action.
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Orochimaru stole the book😩
Wut? Are you serious? Dropped!
DAOIST_SUPREME:Orochimaru stole the book😩
Yes☹
Mastaaah:Wut? Are you serious? Dropped!
Well this is dropped
Lol
DAOIST_SUPREME:Orochimaru stole the book😩
guess who isn't going to waste their time? it's me
DAOIST_SUPREME:Orochimaru stole the book😩
I mean that's me can't even edit what I said ffs
Ashir_Ahmad:guess who isn't going to waste their time? it's me
Book is written in another language which is not available in shinobi world Well there are some lame things but we don't expect everything to be perfect It is still nice one compare to those book in which mc is strongest at the age of 7
Thanks for the heads up 👍🏼 I'm never reading this fic.
Thank you for the heads up
Did the errors ever get better?
from other reviews, doesn't seem like it. I dropped this under 100 chapters I think. Don't remember
Kingola_:Did the errors ever get better?
if nobody stole the book i would have read but now, terrible
i would consider myself stupid but even i wouln't write everything about every that happens in a book
TErrOR_HOur:Book is written in another language which is not available in shinobi world Well there are some lame things but we don't expect everything to be perfect It is still nice one compare to those book in which mc is strongest at the age of 7
No am
Ashir_Ahmad:guess who isn't going to waste their time? it's me
Apart from your work, what fanfics do you recommend that are realistic and with a more realistic style? Also, the open endings that you always leave torture me every day and living in Latin America does not allow me to pay.
Devil hex what are you doing here
Eso tiene bastante, yo creo que tiene demasiado detalles molestos que me quitan la inmersión que antes plantea.
