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I'll partially yield on the Black Templar thing, I still think when one would be surrounded by xenos he'd still be more accepting of a human psyker, especially one who cooks xeno. As for ChatGPT, if it's for punctuation that's perfectly fine. As for flow, you have to strictly moderate it. Ask ChatGPT "Do you inject your bias into a work if I give you a story to make it flow better?", "Is WH40K problematic?" and if answer isn't 'It's fiction' or neutral in nature, then well there you have it. Regenerate the answers couple of times and you might catch interesting patterns. I'll update rating to 3 stars. pity Palps might be becoming agent of chaos. Also wouldn't Palps be pretty strong mentally, all that hiding of his intent and force attunement from the jedi? Especially how you conveyed that Force treats Chaos as existential threat by pushing it out as in Obi Wans case, wouldn't dark side attack Chaos on the behalf of Palps?

Padme would condone the Ultramarines action the moment she found out his brother killed jedi. Her watching him rip a man's legs off and being fine with it. Yeah, sure thing buddy. She's idealist and like the marines are idealist of what they believe, she would die for those ideals sooner. Next. Black Templar wouldn't be suspicions of Palpatine, he would have approved of Palpatine as human cooking the xeno with lightning. "There's some hope for this filthy hive world yet." You mention using ChatGPT, I don't know to what extent and I'm fine with AI. But it has inherent propensity to break in universe logic, rules, morality by applying the same from it's biased programing.

Inorganic, uncharacteristic forced marriage/bonding? ... and dropped

Please don't drop this. I need to know how White shat bricks with other operators when they found out they probably have killed last human!!!!

Is it weird that I find more wrong with this story than tapping your own clones, because lets be frank it's nothing more than plessuring yourself... with yourself.

Abuses their 1st year status as girls, then some abuse their status of nobility.... WAAAHHHH WITCHES NEED EQUAL RIGHTS! There were red flags along the way, now pretty sure author just copy pasted complicated concepts and ideas from wiki while their own hypocrite behaviors spilled into the story.

What if it's Dumbledore who put the note with cloak to not trust Dumbledore so that he would then trust Dumbledore!

Yuna's like: Why you buttering up to me?

I hope nothing's happen, any update?

Oh no, poor Hisoka