It's beautiful! You get all these character interactions and development which you really can't find in most other stories! I also love what you're doing with his sharingan, going in a completely new and unique direction! Great story, give it a read!
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bruh MC : despite having the knowledge of future events and the characters, still, at times, acts like he doesn't know anything. He freaking thinks that Danzo won't kill a leaf shinobi!! He trusts 3rd a bit too much. And is shown surprised/wondering about a lot of things that are very clear in manga/anime. So it's very inconsistent to see MC using his knowledge in one scene, and act like he doesn't know anything in other. Also for some reason, he decided to write down all his memories from his past life in a freaking book! Pure stupidity (I guess in future someone will steal it to make the enemies stronger). 3rd Hokage : He is shown to be even lamer than in canon. Danzo sent root to assassinate him? Okay, no need to do anything or even mention it to Danzo. Danzo is still maintaining root? Alright, no worries. Danzo tried to kill Kakashi? That's okay, I won't ever bring it up or take any action.
