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Aeipathy_02
Aeipathy_02Lv114yr
2021-03-14 13:27

A very intriguing novel. I feel so many thrills and excitement in shifts between povs within the female lead and male lead. The narratives too are very clear and cutting edge. The characters all have their own set of personas. Overall, this book is a great read. Greatly recommended to everyone! Great work author!

A Possessive Mafia Leader

4Maggievasiredz
4.7
51 Chs

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Megana4
Megana4Lv2

Thank you so much, dear. It means a lot.

3yr
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NerdyBookworm_
NerdyBookworm_Lv14

I honestly don't know how there are so many good reviews on here. The grammar is awful, something I thought I would read past as there are some books that don't have amazing grammar but a good story line. But this made it very difficult to follow in some places, making me re read to see what character is speaking. The first couple of chapters basically repeat the synopsis of who each character is. It jumps from ML and FL pov but it just repeats what happens between them (which would have been fine I suppose IF it didn't just repeat using the same exact words what happened. So its just re reading what the previous chapter has been put except for their different days being the only difference) There are times that made me wonder if the author did research into the mafia world because from what I'd read (i think I made it to chapter 12) there weren't even 'soldiers' to do their dirty work. But anyway I don't want to keep ranting as I'm sure you will read it for yourselves.. but what threw me completely off from the story .. AFTER READING REVIEWS OF HOW REALISTIC THE STORY IS: Was how she suddenly felt she loved him. After one date .. a month apart of not seeing each other, the only thing he had been doing for such a 'possessive' man was texting and calling her in that time. But yeah that's my review. update stability .. well it's completed book. world background - yeah it's got the basics. All in all.. very disappointed

3yr

lemone
lemoneLv2

Great story!!! I like the idea of mafias, they sound dangerous and condescending. the way the author writes the story was good, and how the story flows was perfect!! Good job author

4yr
Web_Novel_977
Web_Novel_977Lv4

Finally found a mafia romance novel. So happy🤭🤭🤭 The characters are really good. Czar and Siena, both are billionaires. 🤑 Eagerly waiting to read more chapters.

3yr
Shianne_De_Kock
Shianne_De_KockLv1

The synopsis is extremely interesting. Captivating story from the beginning, cant wait for more uploads. Characters are relatable and I grew fond of them as the story developed. Well written and easy to read. Excellent novel, well done. [img=recommend]

4yr
catvi
catviLv5

The author is upfront about the character's shortcomings, especially the male leads. In most stories like these, authors portray the 'Male Yandere' characteristics as something good. Something doughy-eyed love-struck females crave for. Reality is different. Being stalked is terrifying, so is being blackmailed. The female lead's reactions are realistic and believable. Now with that disastrous start, I am curious as to how the female lead will fall for the male. Interesting is the least I can say.

3yr
LordSputnik
LordSputnikLv13

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Fortheloveofbooks
FortheloveofbooksLv3

The plot is good. The characters are all badass which makes it even better. I love how they relate. I love how the story is going and I can't wait to read more.

4yr
BlaccLotus
BlaccLotusLv12

A fascinating and quite well written story that I can't get enough of this book. The story line is so easy to follow and will trap you with its cliff hangers. I like author's style of writing, it's simple yet neat and very well written. This author updates regularly and has great characters design. As for the story, so far both leads are well described and the story is going to interesting direction. At first it's so easy to fall for Siena as she's really a sweet girl but I can't lie that in the beginning, I quite dislike the male lead from what he's introduced. But as the story goes, I'm beginning to like this Czar as actually he's not bad as I thought. In fact he's quite gentle and sweet when he's Siena. Overall it's really good reading experience and will continue see how the story is going. Dazzling five stars for your creative writing. Honestly I know it's extremely hard for new writers (us) to get easy recognition and decent exposure here in Webnovel, I hope you can write it to the very end. Best luck to you.

4yr
Ken_5osuke
Ken_5osukeLv1

I Love how the main character keeps spamming his ability. I mean, that girl tho Hhahaha. Anyway, I love this novel. It's interesting to read :))))

4yr
Sinadin
SinadinLv3

Just started the book and I'm loving it. Even though it isn't my cup of tea, this however still made me linger. The female lead's reactions are actually realistic and believable. Now with that dreadful start, I am interested as to how the female lead will fall for the male. Thrilling is the least I can say.

3yr
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