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_michael
_michaelLv143yr
2021-07-04 17:54

The story is developing too fast...too much romance,the way they all just find love so easily and start dating quickly is not normal lastly too much cringe Besides that its all right [img=recommend]

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Blonde_Chimera527
Blonde_Chimera527Lv14

To be honest, there is a reason for that, it was really strange for the longest time, but then you find out his backstory much later, and it makes sense why he's so lovey dovey with her all the time.

_michael
_michaelLv14

Yeah…i later ended up understanding as I kept on reading Too bad you can’t edit reviews or I would have changed my earlier review

Blonde_Chimera527:To be honest, there is a reason for that, it was really strange for the longest time, but then you find out his backstory much later, and it makes sense why he's so lovey dovey with her all the time.
Blonde_Chimera527
Blonde_Chimera527Lv14

I'm glad you gave it a chance, and I'm glad you seen to enjoy it more now!

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TestTube10Lv1

I quit reading after chapter five. I just felt the MC's narrating voice doesn't suit her background. She sounds like a spoiled kid from birth, her thoughts are like optimistic and kind of stupid and she hasn't got an unsilly thought inside that noggin. She is a kid, so everything is somewhat justified. I just think, well, a girl who was a 'streetrat' should have a mentality like that too. Even after reincarnation, even if she is a silly and optimiatic girl by heart, her first thought should be 'I need to find food and shelter.' 'This might be dangerous' and 'I need to be careful'. Especially if she has been on the streets for a long time (and she should be, or this detail isn't quite so important to put on the first chapter and launch the beginning of the book) then her personality should also be imbued with a mature and pessimistic nature. I am not saying she cannot be silly, she can, but for her to have survived in the streets for some time, that requires a different kind of worldview that doesn't match her persona. So she needs a sort of hidden rational side that comes out in times of crisis. Which is absent. And thus the character becomes two dimensional and somewhat illogical to read about. The beginning was strong and good, but the rebirth... Nah, pass. And how does she know about systems and statuses anyway? Don't tell me they have internet in the streets? The 'losing virginity to a stone' part was overkill, if you ask me. Anyway, these ditzy type protagonists are not my preference, I only read them if they are COMPLETE MASTERPIECES, this book is very good, promising, just doesn't match my tastes. Try the book if it matches yours, if you don't fancy cute and silly girls, try something else.

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