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rafael_avesani
rafael_avesaniLv123yr
2021-03-02 06:46

I Like this novel, the quality seems good, but it's only beginning so I think is not right do judge story development and world background yet, the MC seems 'cool', she's not the cliche kind of "hero of justice" or "one of a kind genius" that always' exist in fantasy stories that's enough to me. The "system" part is good too, it's not too complex and doesn't have unnecessary stats and information, for me it's shows potential and I'll continue to read for now.

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Silly32
Silly32Lv12

thank you for your comment. i will try read it too since you says it fun.

Yeetdapro
YeetdaproLv3

Ehhh you will see

Relz
RelzLv15

Aound sort of like the girls from wandering inn?

DaoistDij2bf
DaoistDij2bfLv1

ها

THE_SAVAGE_KITTY
THE_SAVAGE_KITTYLv14

the author makes it start good but at around chapter 50 to 610 it goes off the rails

Ravenbabymama
RavenbabymamaLv2

Dose this have romance or is it a yuri ? I don’ mind romance but yuri I don’t like for some real every fl is a yuri or has romance t

Michele_Mays_7238
Michele_Mays_7238Lv12

who cares if you dont like yuri I live yuri and we need more

G0NE
G0NELv1

Romance. At least for the main character, it has been a while so I don't remember if yuri is featured for the other characters.

Ravenbabymama:Dose this have romance or is it a yuri ? I don’ mind romance but yuri I don’t like for some real every fl is a yuri or has romance t
THE_SAVAGE_KITTY
THE_SAVAGE_KITTYLv14

it's OK but once you get to the later chapters there's too many ploy holes to ignore. and it just makes the book really unreadable if there weren't so many ploy holes it would be an amazing book but there's to many plot holes and you can't ever apply logic to the book other wise the plot completely falls apart

MonstruoDormido
MonstruoDormidoLv3

so... before start reading (coz I don't like disappointments) is this story a Yuri coz I love that. that is why I'm asking as not to waste time if it isn't. no offense.

MonstruoDormido
MonstruoDormidoLv3

is it Yuri or not?

Yeetdapro:Ehhh you will see
Hooloovoo
HooloovooLv15

I know this is old, but I did not see an answer to your question. Main character? No yuri. Side characters? Yes yuri.

MonstruoDormido:so... before start reading (coz I don't like disappointments) is this story a Yuri coz I love that. that is why I'm asking as not to waste time if it isn't. no offense.
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TestTube10
TestTube10Lv1

I quit reading after chapter five. I just felt the MC's narrating voice doesn't suit her background. She sounds like a spoiled kid from birth, her thoughts are like optimistic and kind of stupid and she hasn't got an unsilly thought inside that noggin. She is a kid, so everything is somewhat justified. I just think, well, a girl who was a 'streetrat' should have a mentality like that too. Even after reincarnation, even if she is a silly and optimiatic girl by heart, her first thought should be 'I need to find food and shelter.' 'This might be dangerous' and 'I need to be careful'. Especially if she has been on the streets for a long time (and she should be, or this detail isn't quite so important to put on the first chapter and launch the beginning of the book) then her personality should also be imbued with a mature and pessimistic nature. I am not saying she cannot be silly, she can, but for her to have survived in the streets for some time, that requires a different kind of worldview that doesn't match her persona. So she needs a sort of hidden rational side that comes out in times of crisis. Which is absent. And thus the character becomes two dimensional and somewhat illogical to read about. The beginning was strong and good, but the rebirth... Nah, pass. And how does she know about systems and statuses anyway? Don't tell me they have internet in the streets? The 'losing virginity to a stone' part was overkill, if you ask me. Anyway, these ditzy type protagonists are not my preference, I only read them if they are COMPLETE MASTERPIECES, this book is very good, promising, just doesn't match my tastes. Try the book if it matches yours, if you don't fancy cute and silly girls, try something else.

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