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2021-03-05 00:18

OH MY GOD.. that's fantastic..I was so lost.. into the story.. looking forward for more a/n please update quickly.. I really enjoyed reading it

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๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜ฉ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค”๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜ฉ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜ฉ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜ฉ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜ฉ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿค”๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜ฉ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿค”๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜ฉ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿค”๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜ฉ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜ฉ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅต๐Ÿฅต๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜ฉ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ฉ๐Ÿ˜ฉ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Ž The introduction to any novel is very important. It gives how the story is going to go, what kind of personality the MC has, the building of the world, yet some how this author that can't even complete what children on wattpad could do. I would rather read that fan fic of diluc screwing a donut again if it means that this author will gain a brain cell. This will probably be deleted, but for those who read this, be prepared for a story that will make you want to gouge your eyes out and cry from how horrible it is. want to know why im giving a good review? because the author is such a coward She cant even take criticism. boo hoo im an author you cant say anything bad about my story~! Low rating~? on noes~! Delete. The beginning is already confusing, the description is bad. real review? 1, since all i can say is she has description here and there.

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