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2021-03-03 16:52

Hey, guys! Author here! As shameless as I beg for stones, here is me shamelessly reviewing my own work. This is my very first BL series and I hope that you will love it as much as I do. I will keep it lighthearted with a little bit of angst on the side! Also, my reader and friends based server is open to everyone. https://discord.gg/3FRTfENrQQ

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Do you have an Instagram? Its the only form of social media that I use.

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Oh hey there, apologies on the years of late responses. I had to stop writing after DZ and do a self reflection on myself. And for your question, yes I do have an IG account with the same name. I hope that helps. Thank you so much!

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