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Miko_Sayaki
Miko_SayakiLv34yr
2021-04-05 22:52

Sigh... what am I doing with my life? How did I end up here? Anyway, the novel is quite good. I usually don't read BL novels, it's just not my thing. I am afraid of going deeper into the abyss that is the BL genre, and a lot of people would agree with me. Good for the author though. I am not reading this any time soon, since I stopped at chapter 3, but, even if it's BL, it is still a good novel. Most of the time, those that are in the BL genre tends to be quite good in terms of storytelling.

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I might say I don't like BL but... I won't mind having Astolfo as my lover...

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