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2021-03-25 16:20

pensaba que sería una historia de amor que se desarrolla poco a poco pero no y la traducción es pesima que primo esto o esto todo es de primo no vale la pena

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Hello, thank you for reading my novel. But I think you are mistaken because my novel is not a translated novel. I'm sorry that you feel that way while reading my original novel. Have a nice day!

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