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VerhygoLv123yr
2021-03-28 09:20

I'd like to remind that this is entirely my own opinion and only based upon everything up to chapter 22.  Writing Quality: The only noticeable mistakes are definitely caused by auto correct. Everything is high quality, good descriptions, emotional display and fight scenes.  Story Development: It's a relatively slow start, unusual to most novels here, but it shows the quality. This is a book, not a novel. Each chapter is long, but it keeps your attention. You take yourself better enough time, just stopping in the middle of a chapter is seemingly impossible.  Character Design: There are multiple perspectives shown, with each character being fleshed out and given understandable motivations and goals. There is a sense of mystery surrounding them, you will want to know more about how they became the way they are. Update stability: What's to say? The writer does still write, so good. I guess... World Background: Is it Earth? Honestly I don't know, frequent popculture references seem to suggest so. But it might just serve to make in universe references relatable.  There are no real exposition dumps, most is woven into the story in a natural way. It's an interesting world, I want to know more about it.  Summary: I'd like to go to a bookstore and buy it right know. Although that isn't really necessary since there are still so much chapters to read. Give it a try, might just be as enjoyable to you as to me.

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