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kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv33yr
2021-08-03 12:19

Writing quality is actually amazing! It's smooth like butter, dragging me to read the next chapter! The only concern that I have are some lengthy paragraphs. Although this is not actually proble, but I think trimming it down would make a difference. I really love soldiers and their past lives. It has a lot of emotions.

A History of War

Rotten_Avocado
4.8
172 Chs

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Rotten_Avocado
Rotten_AvocadoAuthor

Duly noted 😊😊

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kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv3

Mate, this is from a review swap! I await your review, mate! ^^ (please review NPC Code: Red Riding Hood)

Rotten_Avocado:Duly noted 😊😊
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Rotten_Avocado
Rotten_AvocadoAuthor

done mate!!

kuhaku_sora:Mate, this is from a review swap! I await your review, mate! ^^ (please review NPC Code: Red Riding Hood)
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kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv3

Thanks, mate! ^^

Rotten_Avocado:done mate!!
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