I'd like to remind that this is entirely my own opinion and only based upon everything up to chapter 22.  Writing Quality: The only noticeable mistakes are definitely caused by auto correct. Everything is high quality, good descriptions, emotional display and fight scenes.  Story Development: It's a relatively slow start, unusual to most novels here, but it shows the quality. This is a book, not a novel. Each chapter is long, but it keeps your attention. You take yourself better enough time, just stopping in the middle of a chapter is seemingly impossible.  Character Design: There are multiple perspectives shown, with each character being fleshed out and given understandable motivations and goals. There is a sense of mystery surrounding them, you will want to know more about how they became the way they are. Update stability: What's to say? The writer does still write, so good. I guess... World Background: Is it Earth? Honestly I don't know, frequent popculture references seem to suggest so. But it might just serve to make in universe references relatable.  There are no real exposition dumps, most is woven into the story in a natural way. It's an interesting world, I want to know more about it.  Summary: I'd like to go to a bookstore and buy it right know. Although that isn't really necessary since there are still so much chapters to read. Give it a try, might just be as enjoyable to you as to me.

It's a really good story, good characters, and most importantly a good freakin plot. The holy trinity of storytelling so to speak. My only gripe is with the spelling and grammar. Nothing a good editor cannot solve. Easily one of the best stories around otherwise.

Writing quality is actually amazing! It's smooth like butter, dragging me to read the next chapter! The only concern that I have are some lengthy paragraphs. Although this is not actually proble, but I think trimming it down would make a difference. I really love soldiers and their past lives. It has a lot of emotions.

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The flowing and lively dialogue, descriptive and engaging battle, and a blend of medieval and modern setting. This is the kind of story that invite you to read more

This is a great example of how 1st pov can be interesting. Great story by the way There are many characters in the story with each having different pov and perspectives in the story. we will see them one by one. writing quality - It good, the story telling is descriptive, different emotions are shown effectively. Didn't know you can laugh this much in one fighting scene before. Story development - slow in first few chapters but it draws you in that universe efficiently. Character design - Characters are well thought. We see different character's pov like in first two we see helena next we see Lais. World background - It's gives me guardian of galaxy vibes but only author can tell properly. (I am sometimes wrong). There is everthing in world deimons, guns, healing magic especially Lais (I might be fangirling over him). Keep up great work author. 😁👍

This is definitely a very good novel the writing quality is top notch and the novel is thrilling and engaging keep up the good work[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Okay, I must confess this is the first wonderful (1st person) narration I have ever read here on WN. Highly descriptive, wonderfully blended war, sci fic and fantasy. It's more than what you want to read as a reference to improve your vocabulary, sentence structures and stuff. Although the beginning is kinda slow but I believe that's the demand of the storyline. Characters are seemingly great (gotta explore more about them) and the atmosphere of post apocalypse (I guess) is created with expertise. Though I'm glad I wasn't eating while reading it or the killing of Laton must've made me puke. (Blegh!) So vivid description.