well, here is my comment, please do not be offended by this: the novel has a good writing, heck, that's something difficult to find here in webnovel, the development of the story is good and interesting, also if you like animal girls it will be to your liking, but like any story, this one has something bad (at least for me), the religion professed by their mother and sister makes them prostitutes who let themselves be ****ed for money so that the "beneficiaries" are drunk by the goddess through them (they are called priestesses) they even go as far as get pregnant and they don't care (that's how the MC's sisters were born) and no matter how much you justify with any nonsense that this is their religion or their customs, if the MC said that they will be part of his harem, I think it will give you a bad taste in your mouth if you came for the wincest tag, so I wish you luck author, but I'm out
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I want to thank you for your review, and tell you I appreciate you oppinion and perspective. When starting this story, of course I wanted to make it fantasy, but also as if it really could of happened. Hence, the exodus before the cataclysm when gods and demi-gods walked the earth. With the seperatIion from the human history and events, I also wondered what what this new world would look like given human tendency to repeat the mistakes of the past, and what would pagan religions look like if christianity had never come into existence. In researching pagan religious practices the one the you find is festivals (or holidays) of fertility and harvist that were basically wild *** ogies and temple prostitution (of both ***es). This story happens in semi-current time so these cultures are steeped in these traditions. However, in chapter three Glenna communes with Seline and is given a quest were she must investigate the church basically, and it will be interesting to find out just what the gods want from their parishioners and what has been added by imposters. That is all for hints to up coming content. I am willing to give. Oh, and I will say that Silvains story will be told in Volume 2, and we will find out what she encounters and the choices she makes concerning her love of Virdy and the church. So, I would say I respect your decision leave, but I would encourage any reader to hand in there on this story because it is just starting.
you're right about those times.
OwenQuillin:I want to thank you for your review, and tell you I appreciate you oppinion and perspective. When starting this story, of course I wanted to make it fantasy, but also as if it really could of happened. Hence, the exodus before the cataclysm when gods and demi-gods walked the earth. With the seperatIion from the human history and events, I also wondered what what this new world would look like given human tendency to repeat the mistakes of the past, and what would pagan religions look like if christianity had never come into existence. In researching pagan religious practices the one the you find is festivals (or holidays) of fertility and harvist that were basically wild *** ogies and temple prostitution (of both ***es). This story happens in semi-current time so these cultures are steeped in these traditions. However, in chapter three Glenna communes with Seline and is given a quest were she must investigate the church basically, and it will be interesting to find out just what the gods want from their parishioners and what has been added by imposters. That is all for hints to up coming content. I am willing to give. Oh, and I will say that Silvains story will be told in Volume 2, and we will find out what she encounters and the choices she makes concerning her love of Virdy and the church. So, I would say I respect your decision leave, but I would encourage any reader to hand in there on this story because it is just starting.
I understand brother, your novel is good, it shows that you dedicate time and effort, I understand why you assumed that religious custom and it is fine, but as a reader of the wincest momxson (I know that I am screwed in my head hehehehe) this leaves me with a bitter taste, for the rest everything is great
OwenQuillin:I want to thank you for your review, and tell you I appreciate you oppinion and perspective. When starting this story, of course I wanted to make it fantasy, but also as if it really could of happened. Hence, the exodus before the cataclysm when gods and demi-gods walked the earth. With the seperatIion from the human history and events, I also wondered what what this new world would look like given human tendency to repeat the mistakes of the past, and what would pagan religions look like if christianity had never come into existence. In researching pagan religious practices the one the you find is festivals (or holidays) of fertility and harvist that were basically wild *** ogies and temple prostitution (of both ***es). This story happens in semi-current time so these cultures are steeped in these traditions. However, in chapter three Glenna communes with Seline and is given a quest were she must investigate the church basically, and it will be interesting to find out just what the gods want from their parishioners and what has been added by imposters. That is all for hints to up coming content. I am willing to give. Oh, and I will say that Silvains story will be told in Volume 2, and we will find out what she encounters and the choices she makes concerning her love of Virdy and the church. So, I would say I respect your decision leave, but I would encourage any reader to hand in there on this story because it is just starting.
by the way, do you happen to show scenes where your mother or sisters are described having *** with others?
OwenQuillin:I want to thank you for your review, and tell you I appreciate you oppinion and perspective. When starting this story, of course I wanted to make it fantasy, but also as if it really could of happened. Hence, the exodus before the cataclysm when gods and demi-gods walked the earth. With the seperatIion from the human history and events, I also wondered what what this new world would look like given human tendency to repeat the mistakes of the past, and what would pagan religions look like if christianity had never come into existence. In researching pagan religious practices the one the you find is festivals (or holidays) of fertility and harvist that were basically wild *** ogies and temple prostitution (of both ***es). This story happens in semi-current time so these cultures are steeped in these traditions. However, in chapter three Glenna communes with Seline and is given a quest were she must investigate the church basically, and it will be interesting to find out just what the gods want from their parishioners and what has been added by imposters. That is all for hints to up coming content. I am willing to give. Oh, and I will say that Silvains story will be told in Volume 2, and we will find out what she encounters and the choices she makes concerning her love of Virdy and the church. So, I would say I respect your decision leave, but I would encourage any reader to hand in there on this story because it is just starting.
In my case it does not matter if before the women of the harem of the mc were whores or something like that, what does matter to me is that after being in their harem they continue *****ng with other men or not (in a few words ntr).
No, as a matter of fact there is no ****** at all in any chapters, except the MCs desire and a brief nursing scene with the sister in chapter 1 and something a bit more intence with the mom in chapter 6. There is a conciderable amount of nudity, and lust that the MC feels, but nothing ******uous. And, though Glenna’s back ground is as a priestess and an apostle, which is a missionary, and we know that Silvain and Shaowlynn are VirIdian’s half-sisters, there is no actual scenes of her Temple Prostitution. Silvain is at school getting...indoctrinated...and we will see more of what the chIrch does there, but the hope is that she chooses another path, or is sabed by Virdy and Glenna before she is...corrupted... As a Storyteller I want to make the relationship between Glenna and Silvain and Virdian much more significant than his other relationships, so though ****** is coming i am not rushing to it... at least their first times together that is.
SalsitaHabanera2k:In my case it does not matter if before the women of the harem of the mc were whores or something like that, what does matter to me is that after being in their harem they continue *****ng with other men or not (in a few words ntr).
Thx for the save fellow reader...i really dont like that kind of shit so u saved my time
Thank you for saving my time, honestly i hate this type of stuff with every fiber of my being.
Gracias por tu comentario y si estoy de acuerdo que deja un mal sabor de boca ya que aunque entienda el tiempo en el que sucede las cosas y porque , no significa que pueda aceptarlas con normalidad y sin sentir repulsion o asco por eso ...ademas de que no soy religioso y mucho menos saber las costumbres de esos tiempos ...el solo saber como suceden las cosas ya es suficiente para ni leer esta novela ..pero cada quien con sus gustos
I saw in chapter 6 that MC follows a religious tradition ... so is he going to let his mother be hugged by someone else? It's okay because it can't be changed, but will MC let it happen again?
OwenQuillin:I want to thank you for your review, and tell you I appreciate you oppinion and perspective. When starting this story, of course I wanted to make it fantasy, but also as if it really could of happened. Hence, the exodus before the cataclysm when gods and demi-gods walked the earth. With the seperatIion from the human history and events, I also wondered what what this new world would look like given human tendency to repeat the mistakes of the past, and what would pagan religions look like if christianity had never come into existence. In researching pagan religious practices the one the you find is festivals (or holidays) of fertility and harvist that were basically wild *** ogies and temple prostitution (of both ***es). This story happens in semi-current time so these cultures are steeped in these traditions. However, in chapter three Glenna communes with Seline and is given a quest were she must investigate the church basically, and it will be interesting to find out just what the gods want from their parishioners and what has been added by imposters. That is all for hints to up coming content. I am willing to give. Oh, and I will say that Silvains story will be told in Volume 2, and we will find out what she encounters and the choices she makes concerning her love of Virdy and the church. So, I would say I respect your decision leave, but I would encourage any reader to hand in there on this story because it is just starting.
Thank you for your review and concern. I find it very interesting hiw hot a topic Glenna’s past temple prostitution has become, and yes, Glenna sent Silvain off to become a priestess and there by as one of the her obligations, a temple prostitute. This was not a malicious act,but rather an honor as the priesthood is second only to the royalty in authority. Also, this is their tradition and culture, and isn’t frowned upon by sociaty. However, as every one has wondered in great anticipation will the MC, Viridian allow his women, Glenna and Silvain become prostitutes or continue their Prostitution in the case of Glenna? The answer is; read chapter 13.
Triple_x:I saw in chapter 6 that MC follows a religious tradition ... so is he going to let his mother be hugged by someone else? It's okay because it can't be changed, but will MC let it happen again?
I read it and he will share with father and future children? Does mc still allow thoughts like this to exist?
OwenQuillin:Thank you for your review and concern. I find it very interesting hiw hot a topic Glenna’s past temple prostitution has become, and yes, Glenna sent Silvain off to become a priestess and there by as one of the her obligations, a temple prostitute. This was not a malicious act,but rather an honor as the priesthood is second only to the royalty in authority. Also, this is their tradition and culture, and isn’t frowned upon by sociaty. However, as every one has wondered in great anticipation will the MC, Viridian allow his women, Glenna and Silvain become prostitutes or continue their Prostitution in the case of Glenna? The answer is; read chapter 13.
If the question is, is Viridian willing to share Glenna with his father, Summerset? Then the answer is, yes. She is, after all, Summerset's legal wife. Also, Viridian is to young to marry Silvain, Glenna, Shadolynn, or any other Alf woman until he is 170 years old. Viridian only inherits Glenna legally upon Summerset's death. As for Silvain, and maybe one day Shadolynn, if she is interested, are only betrothed and considered for all intents-and-purposes married to Viridian, but it is not legal or recognized by the governments. It is purely tradition. As for Adult Content: There are no plan for any ménage à trois between Viridian and his girls and any other men including Summerset. The relationship between MC, Glenna, and Summerset is more of a all parties know what is going on but no one talks about it situation. However, if the question is; Will this new familial dynamic actually become an issue later in the story? Then the answer is, you will have to stick with the story and find out. The topic of ****** and temple prostitution of but small parts of a vast pagan culture, and there is a far larger story being told with a lot of moving pieces and characters. I never really intended this topic to be so galvanizing as it has turned out to be. That is why I mention it as part of Glenna's past only.
Triple_x:I read it and he will share with father and future children? Does mc still allow thoughts like this to exist?
It's really curious..I will read it after 40 chapters ... will MC change the world's culture / will he change because of the world?
OwenQuillin:If the question is, is Viridian willing to share Glenna with his father, Summerset? Then the answer is, yes. She is, after all, Summerset's legal wife. Also, Viridian is to young to marry Silvain, Glenna, Shadolynn, or any other Alf woman until he is 170 years old. Viridian only inherits Glenna legally upon Summerset's death. As for Silvain, and maybe one day Shadolynn, if she is interested, are only betrothed and considered for all intents-and-purposes married to Viridian, but it is not legal or recognized by the governments. It is purely tradition. As for Adult Content: There are no plan for any ménage à trois between Viridian and his girls and any other men including Summerset. The relationship between MC, Glenna, and Summerset is more of a all parties know what is going on but no one talks about it situation. However, if the question is; Will this new familial dynamic actually become an issue later in the story? Then the answer is, you will have to stick with the story and find out. The topic of ****** and temple prostitution of but small parts of a vast pagan culture, and there is a far larger story being told with a lot of moving pieces and characters. I never really intended this topic to be so galvanizing as it has turned out to be. That is why I mention it as part of Glenna's past only.
thanks for the review
The author's other stories in literotica show that he is quite fond of netorare
if I write a book, I might adopt some of your ideas in it. They really give me a new outlook on things
OwenQuillin:I want to thank you for your review, and tell you I appreciate you oppinion and perspective. When starting this story, of course I wanted to make it fantasy, but also as if it really could of happened. Hence, the exodus before the cataclysm when gods and demi-gods walked the earth. With the seperatIion from the human history and events, I also wondered what what this new world would look like given human tendency to repeat the mistakes of the past, and what would pagan religions look like if christianity had never come into existence. In researching pagan religious practices the one the you find is festivals (or holidays) of fertility and harvist that were basically wild *** ogies and temple prostitution (of both ***es). This story happens in semi-current time so these cultures are steeped in these traditions. However, in chapter three Glenna communes with Seline and is given a quest were she must investigate the church basically, and it will be interesting to find out just what the gods want from their parishioners and what has been added by imposters. That is all for hints to up coming content. I am willing to give. Oh, and I will say that Silvains story will be told in Volume 2, and we will find out what she encounters and the choices she makes concerning her love of Virdy and the church. So, I would say I respect your decision leave, but I would encourage any reader to hand in there on this story because it is just starting.
