I liked it, although the plot seems typical of a mc op fanfiction, I must admit that the sexual scenes are quite passable, for that reason alone you deserve a 3, but the incest adds a .5 and the fact that they are voluptuous women and milfs another .5 You'll probably abandon it at some point, but as long as I'll continue enjoying it, keep it up.

It's a shame that you lessen the focus on this, I guess it's time to leave it in the library and come back months later

This guys, is a great example of how a fic can greatly surpass the original work This is what the original work should have been This is a f*cking masterpiece

This thing borders on the line between normality and pedophilia, so if you don't like lolis, don't even enter... seriously, leaving aside the somewhat debatable tastes of the author, the story is quite good and the zombie virus plot is entertaining. In my case, the moment he cross the limit, I'm leaving, in the meantime I will continue enjoying the plot... although I admit that it is somewhat difficult to ignore my displeasure

I loved these last chapters, keep it up

hmm, these types of scenes that border on the ntr line are getting a little annoying honestly, I will continue reading but if this escalates further, I will have to drop the novel :/ Leaving aside my concerns, thank you very much for the continuous chapters

If you are a fan of the original novel, please, don't read this shit, you will regret it... seriously Save yourself the frustration and go read something else.

ok I already finished vol 2, and well, I can say that I have mixed feelings, the nsfw scenes were longer and more detailed, which I appreciate, but the september that we saw in vol 1 is nowhere to be found, it was a quite abrupt change In my opinion, the only time where she becomes affectionate with Junk so to speak is during the sexual scenes, from then on she is basically a different personality, it is the only thing I honestly complain about, from then on everything is perfect

22 chapters read from the version without ntr. I honestly loved it, obviously there are parts where there are changes that are a little abrupt and obvious, this is probably because in the old version there was an ntr scene, but the truth i can' don't complain. I really liked how April and September treated Junk much better and even showed him more affection, and also how April stopped being a whore, well she still is, but only for Junk btw I feel that the nsfw scenes are somewhat short and sincerely summarized, I would prefer a little more detail in future edited chapters. So In summary I can only say, excellent work author, please keep it up. (PS: The Junk x Sep scene from chapter 21 was excellent)

Yup, without a doubt this version is much better, I really like how this September treats Junk with more care and love

not anymore

I don't know how far you've updated, so I plan to read only the first 2 volumes.

I'm glad to know that you listened and decided to change the things about ntr, thank you for that and I will gladly give it another chance

that more than giving me relief, worries me xD

It's good to know you're back comrade, I'll be looking forward to the next chapters

oh yeah, the girl the mc has a crush on is dating another guy lol

eh, sigh~ I don't know what to say man, the mc seems extremely pathetic to me, although I suppose it makes sense because of the name of the novel, but I expected something better, you know? In the end he's a fucking voyeur, and he likes to fantasize about things that he can't have or do, it's just pathetic and disappointing. It would not be strange to me, that later this had elements of netorase

At the moment this is going great, and I would recommend it without a doubt, I hope it continues like this [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

This story had great potential... potential that was ruined by a single genre, the ntr. It's incredible how a single stupid decision can completely ruin something, I would have liked to see this story in the weekly or monthly top, it's a shame, I hope you don't make the same mistake in your other novel

Lmao