Now that I know the MC doesn't get ccked, I can say I really love this book. it's not really a flaw per se but you spend too much time on character development, 40 percent of the book is about backstories of characters that I wish you could have just given a summary.
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I can certainly understand your feelings. However, I rarely go into back story unless the character is, or is going to be, pivotal later on. It must be Robert Jordan’s influence on me. He is one of my favorite authors. I don’t usually intend my cast of characters to be so huge. When conceptualizing this story I started off with Daniel Reas and his mother, Helena. Then there are 10 alpha testers in closing Daniel. All of them are sent to mostly the Verdant Realm, but not all of them. Each one has their own story and those that are influential to them that make up their party, and Viridian will have to gather all of them together. It will be like like ten parties joining forces to raid the final boss in a game. Hlina will be very important to Virdy from here on, and I am trying to be quick in summarizing what has happened to her since arriving in the Verdant Realm. With three of the alpha testers all having been born to noble houses, for better or worse, I wanted to tell Hlina’s story. Born a half-Alf in a poor village. Having to flee and live in the wild. Her life has not been very fanciful at all, rather it’s tragic, and how does this tragedy lead to her coming to be in the situation of being possessed by a being of the Abyss. Anyway, that’s all I wanted to say. I hope you continue enjoying the story!
yeah I really do enjoy the story, I just get tired of seeing a new update only to see the chapter is not about the MC 🥺
The feelings mutual my friend
