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Sleeping_Fox_UwU
Sleeping_Fox_UwULv43yr
2021-08-09 09:31

Well a fic with little to no making sense and an mc who's more of disgusting trash than anything... don't read my suggestion... if you don't be careful... cz you will know what disgusting in the truest sense mean...

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Trial_of_Humanity
Trial_of_HumanityAuthor

thanks for the review, and I'm sorry that the story wasn't of your liking. Bye.

Sleeping_Fox_UwU
Sleeping_Fox_UwULv4

No the story is there it's good i say pr else i wouldn't read until all shi* hit the fan... the main thing in every story is a mc... and you know how you build your mc... i have no qualms about all that yoi want to do... but having a fking brain is what i want most in the mc... doesn't matter a hypocrite or a disgusting creep but a fking brain which btw you didn't put or didn't want to put cz of forced plot or whatever you wanted... otherwise i would love the story... cz if you read Chinese novel you know how to shut the brain for storyline or anything but mc is not the way to go for me... so here it is... if your mc actually had his fking brain which he used to be a shi* whatever he was on internet in his world then well it would be even better of a story even with all the dark bs or shi* you gonna put...

Trial_of_Humanity:thanks for the review, and I'm sorry that the story wasn't of your liking. Bye.
Monarch_Of_Hell
Monarch_Of_HellLv4

agreed

Monarch_Of_Hell
Monarch_Of_HellLv4

the mc is kind of useless he barely do anything.

Sleeping_Fox_UwU:No the story is there it's good i say pr else i wouldn't read until all shi* hit the fan... the main thing in every story is a mc... and you know how you build your mc... i have no qualms about all that yoi want to do... but having a fking brain is what i want most in the mc... doesn't matter a hypocrite or a disgusting creep but a fking brain which btw you didn't put or didn't want to put cz of forced plot or whatever you wanted... otherwise i would love the story... cz if you read Chinese novel you know how to shut the brain for storyline or anything but mc is not the way to go for me... so here it is... if your mc actually had his fking brain which he used to be a shi* whatever he was on internet in his world then well it would be even better of a story even with all the dark bs or shi* you gonna put...
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