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Sleeping_Fox_UwU
Sleeping_Fox_UwULv43yr
2021-08-09 09:31

Well a fic with little to no making sense and an mc who's more of disgusting trash than anything... don't read my suggestion... if you don't be careful... cz you will know what disgusting in the truest sense mean...

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Trial_of_Humanity
Trial_of_HumanityAuthor

thanks for the review, and I'm sorry that the story wasn't of your liking. Bye.

Sleeping_Fox_UwU
Sleeping_Fox_UwULv4

No the story is there it's good i say pr else i wouldn't read until all shi* hit the fan... the main thing in every story is a mc... and you know how you build your mc... i have no qualms about all that yoi want to do... but having a fking brain is what i want most in the mc... doesn't matter a hypocrite or a disgusting creep but a fking brain which btw you didn't put or didn't want to put cz of forced plot or whatever you wanted... otherwise i would love the story... cz if you read Chinese novel you know how to shut the brain for storyline or anything but mc is not the way to go for me... so here it is... if your mc actually had his fking brain which he used to be a shi* whatever he was on internet in his world then well it would be even better of a story even with all the dark bs or shi* you gonna put...

Trial_of_Humanity:thanks for the review, and I'm sorry that the story wasn't of your liking. Bye.
Monarch_Of_Hell
Monarch_Of_HellLv4

agreed

Monarch_Of_Hell
Monarch_Of_HellLv4

the mc is kind of useless he barely do anything.

Sleeping_Fox_UwU:No the story is there it's good i say pr else i wouldn't read until all shi* hit the fan... the main thing in every story is a mc... and you know how you build your mc... i have no qualms about all that yoi want to do... but having a fking brain is what i want most in the mc... doesn't matter a hypocrite or a disgusting creep but a fking brain which btw you didn't put or didn't want to put cz of forced plot or whatever you wanted... otherwise i would love the story... cz if you read Chinese novel you know how to shut the brain for storyline or anything but mc is not the way to go for me... so here it is... if your mc actually had his fking brain which he used to be a shi* whatever he was on internet in his world then well it would be even better of a story even with all the dark bs or shi* you gonna put...
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Godack
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Writing Quality : 5/5 The flow of the story is steady so far and every chapter there is a good amount of progress without going too fast. The grammar is mostly flawless as I have only found one grammar mistake. And the quality of the writing also correlates to the quantity of writing, there is enough text in seven stories for me to read for about 20 to 25 minutes. Stability of updates : 2/5 So far there is no stability in the update schedule, I only gave 2 coins for uploading. Story Development : 4/5 The story is developing steadily through the first 7 chapters, I could easily follow the story and the background information was easy to understand and was nicely integrated into the story. Character Design : 4/5 This is where it gets tricky, I personally do not like Victor’s personality. But that doesn’t mean that the rating should be lower as my opinion in the rating shouldn’t matter. All I have to say about his character design is that it isn’t flat and I do hope to see his character develop after he spends some time in the world of fiction. World Background : 2/5 I know nothing about Monster Girl Quest and I certainly won’t want to know anything more about it outside of this fanfiction. The reason for the low rating is obvious, it is based on an already existing story which doesn’t make it original and I do not know if the author has added anything original. My overall opinion about this fanfiction is that it is good, the author has done a good job of making me interested in his story even when it is based on a story/game/ whatever it is that I don’t even know. I recommend it.

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