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2021-07-05 02:29

A solid 4 stars. 5/5 for Writing Quality- There are no stupid errors in grammar and sentences are quite easy read. 4/5 for Stability of Updates. 4/5 for Story development- I didn't like how author ardently wants to stick to plot. He tries to fix things to stay near the plot. I want MC to run around on his own, forging his own path not sticking with the former MC and his party which has that stupid monster lord inside it. I binged this once more after Post nut clarity and she IS the assh*le here. I don't like her much now. MC should get off that wheelchair now. I want him to start standing up for himself, literally not just verbally. (pun unintended) More fighting scenes. More blood and gore. 3/5 for Character Design- MC isn't rational at times and is plain stupid sometimes. I like how he smart at times but mostly messes things up somehow. This is like real life. You somehow mess up even the most easiest tasks. 4/5 for World Background- I don't know much about the world but the I guess I give it 4 as a standard? 10/10 nice author and book would read again. I want EVILMC book from you author. You work wonders.

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