So, for people who don't bother to read the second part of the synopsis: I am entitled to not care of your opinion if there is something you don't like of some people's personalities and the bullshit of "Beta MC". I am writing a story, not your Ego Fap Corner. There will be updates once every week at sunday after the weekly reload, because I still want to keep stocked chapters. When I finished writing a volume, I will ultimately shift to maximum overdrive and make 1 chapter a day until we reach the end if the volume. I will erase any stupid shit like Exp Reviews or senseless reviews, including gratitude reviews, whether they are 5 or 0 stars. You want to review? Drop in good reasons and points that you want to make up so I can at least try to fix it for future readers, don't be an asshole and give 1 star for no apparent reason because there is no glory on that, only loss of braincells. Fuck waifu-carrying world-hopping fanfictions, I want to write everything, which includes broken hearts, tragedy, comedy, and op moments. A few of you weaklings won't stop me.

An ancient being made this fanfic, someone as morally ****ed up and as disgusted with the way this website changed as us, perhaps even more. So it is only natural that i show some much needed support, Cheese know that it’s hard to get motivation when some ****ers come and good reviews help with it. The story is very good, still not enough chapters for me to give a real review but i am definitely looking forward to the ones i have yet to read. Anyway, The Mad Prince paid his regards...

Writing Quality : 5/5 The flow of the story is steady so far and every chapter there is a good amount of progress without going too fast. The grammar is mostly flawless as I have only found one grammar mistake. And the quality of the writing also correlates to the quantity of writing, there is enough text in seven stories for me to read for about 20 to 25 minutes. Stability of updates : 2/5 So far there is no stability in the update schedule, I only gave 2 coins for uploading. Story Development : 4/5 The story is developing steadily through the first 7 chapters, I could easily follow the story and the background information was easy to understand and was nicely integrated into the story. Character Design : 4/5 This is where it gets tricky, I personally do not like Victor’s personality. But that doesn’t mean that the rating should be lower as my opinion in the rating shouldn’t matter. All I have to say about his character design is that it isn’t flat and I do hope to see his character develop after he spends some time in the world of fiction. World Background : 2/5 I know nothing about Monster Girl Quest and I certainly won’t want to know anything more about it outside of this fanfiction. The reason for the low rating is obvious, it is based on an already existing story which doesn’t make it original and I do not know if the author has added anything original. My overall opinion about this fanfiction is that it is good, the author has done a good job of making me interested in his story even when it is based on a story/game/ whatever it is that I don’t even know. I recommend it.

I love the concept of this fanfic. I always hated it when the mc would bring other people to another world so I'm happy that this won't happen and it will just be a fresh start. And I can handle the release schedule cause the chapters are so long, Keep up the good work I love it.

A rare fanfic of Monster Girl Quest. Well written and author made the world more life on it. The MC have the capability of being OP as long as he had more time and money. Looking forward to his growth and the relationship he will have to other characters.

Well a fic with little to no making sense and an mc who's more of disgusting trash than anything... don't read my suggestion... if you don't be careful... cz you will know what disgusting in the truest sense mean...

A solid 4 stars. 5/5 for Writing Quality- There are no stupid errors in grammar and sentences are quite easy read. 4/5 for Stability of Updates. 4/5 for Story development- I didn't like how author ardently wants to stick to plot. He tries to fix things to stay near the plot. I want MC to run around on his own, forging his own path not sticking with the former MC and his party which has that stupid monster lord inside it. I binged this once more after Post nut clarity and she IS the assh*le here. I don't like her much now. MC should get off that wheelchair now. I want him to start standing up for himself, literally not just verbally. (pun unintended) More fighting scenes. More blood and gore. 3/5 for Character Design- MC isn't rational at times and is plain stupid sometimes. I like how he smart at times but mostly messes things up somehow. This is like real life. You somehow mess up even the most easiest tasks. 4/5 for World Background- I don't know much about the world but the I guess I give it 4 as a standard? 10/10 nice author and book would read again. I want EVILMC book from you author. You work wonders.

Well here i am, the 10 person who gave you a review, and here is my review, wow i swim in the fanfic section to find copper but i found gold instead. your story is intriguing from my point of view so don't give up, and please release more chapter. correct me if I'm wrong and good luck.

Stories like ur arent my thing cause of the verse, reading smut aint my thing, but ur story is really interesting. Idk why but its nice, the MC is cool, the world is described well and its written in manner which I understood , it nice cause I dont know anything about this verse other than what it ' is '. so nice. Also like that theres barely any smut, and that the MC is ' kinda ' crippled, if u can explore it more, like make it focus. I also like the exploration of MC shit, its done well. That said the possible NTR aint my thing, neither is netori, but will stay till its comes cause this story is interesting. And recently there arent many good stories to read here, this is good though, like its interesting, a usual smut world but smut aint the focus, nice.