The internal struggle in Ryo's mind is the highlight of this story. From what he went through during his adolescence up to when he was already an ex yakuza was so realistically laid out that I could practically perceive the pain he's going through. It gives us a feeling it can happen to any of us. That guilty struggle to right the wrong of the past but still ending up choosing an inescapable path of deceit really hits the spot. We've got a real marvel of a storyteller here. Great job, author! This one can potentially become a big scifi hit someday, so good luck 👌👍☺

.................................................. Great work. The Grammer can be improved. plus the story line is interesting. work more on your chapters.

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It might be very tough to write a review after reading only 5 chapters, but the story is overall really good so far, but not the best. I give only gave 5 stars for Sumire because she seems so much more interesting than Ryo! Ryo is a very complicated character that really reminds me of my childhood of being told what to do. How the Aries world was created still isn't clear though, I'm a bit confused why and what the methods used were. But I like how you integrated futuristic Japan with a fictional world. Also, you post chapters like every 2-3 days, maybe once every week would be fine. I am very excited to see what's next!! [img=recommend]