Violet9

Thank you :) I appreciate it.

Thanks for your feedback! I would like you to know what you mean by “write blindly” so I can improve. Can you elaborate?

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That was definitely my plan. The idea is that he never acts independently and relies on everyone to get the job done. Thanks so much for your review! I’ll definitely go back and proofread a ton after I release my 10th chapter! [img=recommend]

Super descriptive on the world! Makes me feel like I'm in a real-life anime! I can totally envision this happening. The beginning part is a little fast though, but I'm very impressed with the writing quality overall. I'm also a bit new to this entire parallel universe thing, but it's really interesting. I'm excited to read more!

Thanks for reading! I'll definitely go back once I've written a bit more and improve my grammar!

Totally a possibility! 😂 Thanks for reading, (if you did) I appreciate it!

Hello! Thank you so much for your review. The idea is that aliens have slightly more strength and better brainpower than humans. You'll get a vast majority of aliens to be a lot smarter and faster than them. That's why they're faster workers and more capable of multitasking. But I'll fix that and make it more clear. And yeah, I agree. I just wanted to show how the economy went utterly haywire after the aliens started inhabiting Earth. I'll remove that! Thank you for your feedback! I hope you enjoy reading more later on! [img=recommend]

Thanks for your review! Unfortunately, I'm not seeking to monetize my writing. Just doing it for fun and looking to improve. Thanks for your offer!

Thank you so much! [img=recommend]