Well what can I say... The writing is good but the development is way... Way too forced to the point of I can call the mc an idiot for his decisions...
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If you can read forward and see how much it has improved. -and if you still hate it, I will understand
What are the mistakes he made?
i read through it and he was arrogant so he didnt decide to wait for the magic and I dont see the reason he shouldnt have teleported to the place that would take months to reach
Who is the romantic interest?
Wut
For those who did not read the book- The book follows the entire story of Percy Jackson, a boy set in modern times who discovers he is a demigod. Son of Poseidon, he was abandoned by his father because of an oath to not father any more kids, since the resulting demigods are too powerful. Percy’s journey turns even more electrifying when he discovers that numerous people and monsters are trying to kill him, as he was the son of one of the big three (Poseidon, Zeus, Hades) who were ultimately forbidden to have any kids. Percy also finds out that there are even more 'Demigods' in Camp Half-Blood at Long Island. With his friend [and romantic interest] Annabeth by his side, his best friend and companion Grover, a satyr, who Percy finds out is actually his bodyguard, his journey across the frightening mystic worlds begins. Percy soon finds himself fulfilling extraordinary quests and fighting battles with the gods
"Bro you don't understand, it gets better by chapter 722971 of the peepeesh*t Arc. Try it bro trust me." Literally every book you write has the same sh*tty forced plot development in it. You are a creative, but a bad writer. Sorry.
Thank you for saying it. I hate when authors go: "pLeAsE keep reading my story, I swear it gets better in chapter xxxxx". It's their fault if the story can't hook readers from the start. I won't force myself to read dozens of frustrating chapters of a story just because it might get better eventually...
