Alchemist

This story is quickly going downhill. I feel like the author keeps forgetting he's writing a SI/OC-insert story with a System. Usually MCs with a System become OP very quickly, while the one in this story barely shows up and doesn't actually seem to make the MC much stronger. I really don't get why it was even included. The MC is supposed to have a System, memories of the books/movies and be a very talented wizard, who's also willing to train/study hard to improve. With all of the above advantages the MC should be able to improve incredibly quickly and become very powerful, if not completely OP. At fist the story did seem to be going that way. Yet, the MC hasn't really been improving recently, despite supposedly getting better instructions than he did at Hogwarts. In fact, he seems to be regressing and getting weaker. Even his personality seems to be regressing. He originally became more confident and strong-willed after the SI took over Snape's body, but in the recent chapters he's become as insecure and easy to push around as he was before the SI took over his body. I understand that the author needed a way to bring him back to Britain, since that's where the canon story happens, but it was handled terribly and felt like the MC's character, intelligence and competence were assassinated. I'll keep reading for a few more chapters in case it gets better again, but I'm not very hopeful. I've started losing interest since the author nerfed the MC by suddenly making British dueling so much worse than international dueling, that the MC instantly went from being good and very talented at dueling, to seemingly being worse than an amateur and having to unlearn everything he knows.

Author can't keep the MC's Cultivation level consistent. The MC literally jumped an entire realm without explanation. MC also has no self control, he just randomly bursts out laughing in a large gathering, like a lunatic.

What the hell is 'Earl Dervish'? I'm guessing it's supposed to be 'Starter', but how do you end up with Earl Dervish? Could you not even be bothered to edit the chapters after MTLing them?

The story itself isn't great and just feels like a standard power fantasy with an OP protagonist, but it's somewhat readable. Unfortunately the spelling and grammar are both terrible. I actually got a headache trying to read this mess. I genuinely can't understand how this story has more than 4 stars. I've seen MTLed Chinese novels with better spelling and grammar.

The hell is 'Earl Dervish'? Do you not edit the chapters?

The MC really p*sses me off. He's always a passive coward who doesn't take the initiative in anything and just spends most of his time whining about his situation. After becoming a Demi-Servant, he doesn't take any time actually figuring out what he can and can't do with his new abilities. Dude, doesn't have an original though in his head and only does something when he's pushed into it. OG Shirou has his issues as well, but compared to this pathetic, waste of space OC-Insert, he's practically perfect.

I can't say I'm a fan of introducing characters from other fandoms like Kuroka. I guess I'll have to see if this is the only time or not. If more characters from other fandoms show up, I'll stop reading this story.

The last chapter was published more than 20 days ago. Is this story abandoned?

Bruh, Technician only increases the moves power by 50%, so Bullet Punch would increase from 40 to 60, not 80. The Author apparently can't do basic math...

The hell is a Pokémon Illustrated book? Just say PokeDex. Please take some time to actually proofread and edit the chapters to make them easier to read.