Alchemist

Unfortunately, it seems like the fic is becoming more of a xianxia novel as it goes on. Now, instead of just training, Kakashi is going into seclusion to break through. Is he trying to reach the golden core realm or something?

The weirdest part to me is that xianxia novels tend to have spirit veins or something like that, which are basically the same thing, but because dragon vein has 'dragon' in the name, it clearly has to be an actual dragon...

Why do Chinese authors insist on mixing wuxia/xianxia elements into stories based on manga/anime? Having the Dragon Vein Chakra take the form of an actual dragon, just because it has dragon in its name is so incredibly stupid, it's almost enough to make me drop this fic. I hope this doesn't get mentioned again, or I'll actually have to stop reading this story.

Honestly, the Future Sights should've hit and taken out Rhyperior. Having Gary constantly win without even losing a single Pokémon is getting pretty boring.

Looks like you skipped a chapter or two...

Thanks for the warning, this kind of story definitely isn't for me then.

I'm really not a fan of the MC being able to gain more Kekkei Genkai from his System, so I'll stop reading here.

How is the MC doing so much worse than canon Kakashi? This is just embarrassing.

Since the Jutsu creates a wall, the Jutsu should probably be something like Water Formation Wall. Water Severing Wave is the technique Tobirama uses to spit out a beam of water like a pressure cutter.

And just like that my interest rapidly fades. Based on the fic's summary, I was looking forward to the MC only having Blue Silver Grass as a Martial Soul and using his cheat to enhance it, only for him to immediately gain two more martial souls. Having twin martial souls would've already been cliché enough, but having a third is just way over the top.