Item: Percy Jackson: The God of Magic
Rating: 3
Author: RestingTree

RestingTreeLv43yr

2021-02-28 12:03

3 Stars for the author. 1 Star for the book. The grammar isn't terrible, but its so inconsistent in the wrong areas that it stands out, but every time you see another properly spelled sentence, " Oh it was just a minor mistake ". But by CH 16 I had to stop reading, it was driving me up a wall. The personality of the characters is questionable, the dialogue is forced and short-lived, and just everything is a bitt off-putting.

Percy Jackson: The God of Magic

CORNBRINGER

4.8

176 Chs

Liked by 37 people

Replies6

OutofideasLOLLv13

I pity you.

2yr

RestingTreeLv4

Thanks, it be hurting out here UwU

OutofideasLOL:I pity you.

2yr

OutofideasLOLLv13

Lol you told 3 stars for the author and 1 star for the story. You ended up giving 3. I don't understand your math?

RestingTree:Thanks, it be hurting out here UwU

2yr

RestingTreeLv4

There's no math, I just don't like the story but like the author cause his other work is pretty good, I'm just not a fan of this one. I pity you :) <3 ~ LLL

OutofideasLOL:Lol you told 3 stars for the author and 1 star for the story. You ended up giving 3. I don't understand your math?

2yr

OutofideasLOLLv13

3+1=4... Just saying

RestingTree:There's no math, I just don't like the story but like the author cause his other work is pretty good, I'm just not a fan of this one. I pity you :) <3 ~ LLL

2yr

Kamikage_1774Lv11

He was more so saying he rated the story 3 stars because he enjoyed the author's other works. Without that, he would've rated 1 star.

OutofideasLOL:3+1=4... Just saying

2yr

Other Reviews

light_shinigamiLv1

Well if it is the 'Great Lord CORNBRINGER' no one can question the quality, cause it is always stable yet very interesting that it makes people very curious about the next chapter though i am a harem-lover, the game of thrones fanfic changed my mind about harem, now i don't always judge a novel by if its harem or not. The author is awesome at adding right type of comedy to the chapter in the right moment. Thus i seriously recommend people to read it. And one more thing, can someone give me author-sama's discord? cause i recently made a discord account. THANK YOU FOR ANOTHER GREAT NOVEL AUTHOR-SAMA

3yr

Dragon_5081Lv2

Hope it's an Annabeth ship lol . Also I'm reviewing it as 5 stars just through my prior biases' of reading CornBringer's novels. Is the universe your writing about only about the PercyJackson gods and world or are you gonna include the whole verse with Norse and Egyptian gods.

3yr

ProProcrastinationLv4

I thought I was hooked at the start. The mc has a different background in the world as most fanficTions have the mc as. i was interested in his magic abilities however from chapter 14 onwards I just lost all of my interest. The mc goes from someone who is average intelligence to someone who consecutively makes dumb deciSions. The author forces the plot way too much for it to be enjoyable for myself, and from the comments on chapters, many others as well.

3yr

AbelWizardLv3

Percy Jackson and CORNBRINGER.... = Amazing history. PFBJZBPFBJZBPFBJZBPFBJZBPFBJZBPFBJZBPFBJZBPFBJZPFBJZPFBJZBBBPFBJZBPFBJZBPFBJZBPFBJZBPFBJZBPFBJZBPFBJZBPFBJZPFBJZPFBJZBBBPFBJZBPFBJZBPFBJZBPFBJZBPFBJZBPFBJZBPFBJZBPFBJZPFBJZPFBJZBBB

3yr

TruthSetsYouFreeLv4

Well what can I say... The writing is good but the development is way... Way too forced to the point of I can call the mc an idiot for his decisions...

3yr

HentaiVeteranLv4

i drop this shit at chapter 18, MC is stupid..............................................................................................................................................................................

3yr

VurevaLv14

Reveal spoiler

3yr

LightEaterLv14

Reveal spoiler

3yr

UrAverageSkeletonLv5

Honestly i like this ine more than the game of thrones one!

3yr

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