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2021-02-13 20:47

This story is pretty good but i will not give it 5 stars for a reason that mc's personality is not really stable and so are his relation with others. Like you don't know when he will explode. Other thing is his relationship with others some time he treat them as his friends and the very next chapter he would say he don't care if they live or die. The worst is part with hermione some times he says that she is like her sister and other times he would just leave her to fend off herself saying he doesn't care about anyone other than his family. Plus despite the harem tag there is no harem insight for long. Hermione is shown to love him deeply but he constantly asks her to move on or you will die alone. I don't know why there is a harem tag here may be author is thinking of ending the story with a harem idk but really the tag feels misleading i mean there is not even a little romantic development between him and any other women except luna who is the main wife.

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