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ShuYmeLv53yr
2021-09-02 23:04

Just reread this its not that good, grammar is ok but the story feels so rushed and the mc is very stupid or atleast chooses to do stupid stuff the entire hp arc feels like an intRoductury chapter which i guess it is however its not a good one, throughout the entire fic i wanted it to end it was a complete waste of time on my part

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JustArt
JustArtLv3

agreed

Golden_Rain
Golden_RainLv2

Well grammar is subpar at best. But yeah, the MC is an idiot all around the story. Not sure, but i guess the author got trapped in a cliche, like making reader feel better if the MC is like a 3 yo kid.

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