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2021-02-11 12:18

............. Wow, this is one amazing story... You can see that this story has a great potential... I love the description, and how he portayed the story... Really amazing, and unique for me... Add in my lib... Hope for more chapter author sama...

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RachelRuth
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After reading the initial seven chapters, I'd like to give my review in regards to this book. It's a lighthearted story that's a good way to pass the time if you enjoy these type of stories ^_^ First and foremost, the cover caught my attention with its simplistic but original design. Writing Quality - The writing is understandable and clear enough for general readers. There could be some edits done to make it flow smoother, but its written in such a way that the plot moves forward without any filler. It could be said to incorporates something akin to the Japanese Yonkoma comic-structure. Ki: Sets the scene Sho: Develops the preexisting scene Ten: A new development occurs Ketsu: Conclusion which sets up the next chapter Each chapter I've read has its significance and adds up to the lore, plot development and such. With some wacky author notes in the middle whenever he pulls out a reference (Now that's a little disturbing for some, but the author is having fun and I presume so does the other readers) That's why it feels lighthearted to me. Enjoyable nonetheless. Story Development It won't make you sob tears and fill your soul with despair over the fate of the goblins (or I'm cruel) but you can definitely understand the logic in the story. Albeit, I did get surprised by some of the development in the earlier chapters, but later on they made sense Character Design The Blank State MC. It's the Asian man who likes to play games, stays indoors and whatnot. Now this is not such a bad thing, it's intentional, and we did get glimpses into his personality. You'd no doubt agree with his convictions per se on how he decides his fate naturally World Background Somewhat interwoven with the story, and if you've read the synopsis. We have a powerful goblin that brings our protagonist to his world to save their race :3 There's a little more to it, but you'll have to read it yourself I'm a little biased with the 5 star ratings, and yet I'm not particularly a nitpicky person. I genuinely enjoyed this book <3 Glad I found this one while I was procrastinating lol. Give it a try my friend~!

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