Item: Goblin General
Rating: 5
Author: Ouithi

OuithiLv54yr

2021-02-06 20:06

A good book. author is new but has decent writing. the story in itself is unique. I've read til ten chapters and found it quite refreshing. anybody reading review, at least read five chappies then decide if this is your cup of tea or not.😁

Goblin General

Nekoman

4.7

197 Chs

Liked by 5 people

Replies3

NekomanAuthor

thank you so much

4yr

ArashiTenebrisLv5

Your novel seem interesting, so I bookmark it, will check in free time ------------------------------------------------------------------------- P/S: last question/advice,---------------------------------------------------- have you check the strategy guide from a youtube of this video ? "TERROR INJECTION! - Total War Tactics: Warhammer". Can give you a better basic idea of army strategy here (since warhammer version can give you a better idea for an army in the fantasy world, but still Total War isn't a fully realistic simulation and never claimed to be, and playing against AI will only teach you the absolute basics, especially how bad the enemy A.I in later Total war game series, but it can still give you a decent idea of how armies interact and how a commander might react to a given situation.

3yr

ArashiTenebrisLv5

That all for now, if you have trouble in certain topic and need material/tips in writing then you can ask me. Remember, take it at your own base, no need to rush or try to use all since some tips maybe not suitable for your novel direction there. If you want to research more yourself then you can check on my thread on royalroad site 'Forum And Writing Directory for Authors' and check the post topic to hyperlink jump to that post for certain topic, that all.

ArashiTenebris:Your novel seem interesting, so I bookmark it, will check in free time ------------------------------------------------------------------------- P/S: last question/advice,---------------------------------------------------- have you check the strategy guide from a youtube of this video ? "TERROR INJECTION! - Total War Tactics: Warhammer". Can give you a better basic idea of army strategy here (since warhammer version can give you a better idea for an army in the fantasy world, but still Total War isn't a fully realistic simulation and never claimed to be, and playing against AI will only teach you the absolute basics, especially how bad the enemy A.I in later Total war game series, but it can still give you a decent idea of how armies interact and how a commander might react to a given situation.

3yr

Other Reviews

NekomanAuthor

this Nekoman, the author, I feel shameless for giving my own book a review but everyone's doing it so yea Anyway, this book is about military, mostly tactics and all, I took a lot of quotes, mostly from Sun Tzu, thanks for reading the book

4yr

RachelRuthLv13

After reading the initial seven chapters, I'd like to give my review in regards to this book. It's a lighthearted story that's a good way to pass the time if you enjoy these type of stories ^_^ First and foremost, the cover caught my attention with its simplistic but original design. Writing Quality - The writing is understandable and clear enough for general readers. There could be some edits done to make it flow smoother, but its written in such a way that the plot moves forward without any filler. It could be said to incorporates something akin to the Japanese Yonkoma comic-structure. Ki: Sets the scene Sho: Develops the preexisting scene Ten: A new development occurs Ketsu: Conclusion which sets up the next chapter Each chapter I've read has its significance and adds up to the lore, plot development and such. With some wacky author notes in the middle whenever he pulls out a reference (Now that's a little disturbing for some, but the author is having fun and I presume so does the other readers) That's why it feels lighthearted to me. Enjoyable nonetheless. Story Development It won't make you sob tears and fill your soul with despair over the fate of the goblins (or I'm cruel) but you can definitely understand the logic in the story. Albeit, I did get surprised by some of the development in the earlier chapters, but later on they made sense Character Design The Blank State MC. It's the Asian man who likes to play games, stays indoors and whatnot. Now this is not such a bad thing, it's intentional, and we did get glimpses into his personality. You'd no doubt agree with his convictions per se on how he decides his fate naturally World Background Somewhat interwoven with the story, and if you've read the synopsis. We have a powerful goblin that brings our protagonist to his world to save their race :3 There's a little more to it, but you'll have to read it yourself I'm a little biased with the 5 star ratings, and yet I'm not particularly a nitpicky person. I genuinely enjoyed this book <3 Glad I found this one while I was procrastinating lol. Give it a try my friend~!

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KaiyuLv4

I don't know what this is about or how the story goes. But just for this masterpiece of a picture for the story and the guys to put it up. I'm giving it 5 stars. I wish the author best of luck

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The_ProcrastinatorLv13

Reveal spoiler

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Homia4okLv4

ok. so starting with the plot: it is good. It's not smt exceptionally new, but it's interesting. Character development is also ok, as the number of chapters is too small yet. What i didn't like are the grammar mistakes, though they are not that serious, there's a lot of small "typo"s and mistakes. hmmm, that's pretty much it. oh, the world is also ok, basic fantasy setting u could say. nicely done, author, but I'd recommend either an editor, or just a person with good grammar tp check and instruct u on what ur mistakes are. 🖤🤍🖤🤍🖤🤍🖤🤍🖤🤍

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KrmlyLv13

Está buenísimo, entretenido, acción, en fin muy bien pero digo lo mismo que con los demás deberían traducirlo, somos muchos los hispano parlantes que tenemos que usar traductor, por no saber el idioma, y al final nos aburrimos. Felicidades autor.

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A_O_4668Lv3

I have not gotten to chapter five yet but the book is great and the cover is god tier you are doing great man you can expect my power stones

3yr

WuNiangLv3

I found that this book is very interesting. The author clearly has his own unique style in writing and I like it very much. I think that the author have a great potential and comedy is his strong point here. Thank you so much, author-sama, for this novel. [img=recommend]

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Bad_TotodileLv3

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