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Nekoman
NekomanAuthor4yr
2021-01-21 14:39

this Nekoman, the author, I feel shameless for giving my own book a review but everyone's doing it so yea Anyway, this book is about military, mostly tactics and all, I took a lot of quotes, mostly from Sun Tzu, thanks for reading the book

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peacelucky
peaceluckyLv13

Nekoman. Please respond to this. I have been looking for that cat picture please give me the link. Thanks.

Nekoman
NekomanAuthor

https://images.app.goo.gl/fjHnHx7fqLwWgLaY7

peacelucky:Nekoman. Please respond to this. I have been looking for that cat picture please give me the link. Thanks.
Nekoman
NekomanAuthor

does it work?

peacelucky:Nekoman. Please respond to this. I have been looking for that cat picture please give me the link. Thanks.
peacelucky
peaceluckyLv13

Yes it works. Thanks so much man!

Nekoman:does it work?
haloo
halooLv11

hope this novel go to thousand chapter..because i dont like short novel...

Nekoman
NekomanAuthor

Damn, I hope I won't break before that but surely I won't... Maybe... At least 500 chapter should be the minimum

haloo:hope this novel go to thousand chapter..because i dont like short novel...
Alex_Torres_4637
Alex_Torres_4637Lv11

I'd brake on one chapter

Nekoman
NekomanAuthor

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Alex_Torres_4637:I'd brake on one chapter
ArashiTenebris
ArashiTenebrisLv5

* For more idea to use, especially the first one: --------------------- + Sometime you need to show certain trump card of your to get certain benefit/prevent something there, for example in certain novel, one of your friend have get a dangerous ability that basically make other losing their life span and potential for further strenght there, and other faction, especially the enemy don't want to face it in the fight in the future (and currently that friend didn't joint any strong faction to have a backing aside from the mc group), so they try to assasinate him, but since the mc managed to make a teleport item that ignore all space restriction, and although he plan to hide this trump card, but notice the situation, he plan to deliberately show this card when rescure his friend, so now other can't do it now since that friend can just escape any time when they try to do so (even with trap that prevent normal teleporting), oh and don't forgot that friend are at least strong enough to not get one shoot/capture right away so he still can disappear easily. Basically it good to keep the trump card for emergency, but something you need to reveal it to gain benefit or for deterent again other from making similar thing like that again. -------------------------------- + Another idea is some certain event, although it seem like someone are planning beind to cause trouble, but when go to the source of it, the mc end up noticed that it was a unintened accident/butter fly effect. The example here is a wave of 4 arm monkey suddenly come to this region and attack the local (the thing is they should only in the way eastern side of forest instead of here), we thought it was a conspiracy (since one of the mc ally was in that region and get attacked, and they need reinforce), but in the end after the mc group try to figure out, they finally notice that the reason those monkey beast do a mass migration here is because the faction on the other side was expanding (and have nothing to do with this attacked local or mc group), and end up take over/over hunting this monkey Ecosystem, so they forced to move to other place due to that consequence/butter fly effect. So basically it a coincident, not all the events have to be around/about the mc or conspirecy thing, the mc could be just happen to be there, too many novel keep make the universe bend and go around the mc and not the opposite

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TheBlueDevil
TheBlueDevilLv12

is there evoling in this?

TheBlueDevil
TheBlueDevilLv12

or game like elemets?

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RachelRuth
RachelRuthLv13

After reading the initial seven chapters, I'd like to give my review in regards to this book. It's a lighthearted story that's a good way to pass the time if you enjoy these type of stories ^_^ First and foremost, the cover caught my attention with its simplistic but original design. Writing Quality - The writing is understandable and clear enough for general readers. There could be some edits done to make it flow smoother, but its written in such a way that the plot moves forward without any filler. It could be said to incorporates something akin to the Japanese Yonkoma comic-structure. Ki: Sets the scene Sho: Develops the preexisting scene Ten: A new development occurs Ketsu: Conclusion which sets up the next chapter Each chapter I've read has its significance and adds up to the lore, plot development and such. With some wacky author notes in the middle whenever he pulls out a reference (Now that's a little disturbing for some, but the author is having fun and I presume so does the other readers) That's why it feels lighthearted to me. Enjoyable nonetheless. Story Development It won't make you sob tears and fill your soul with despair over the fate of the goblins (or I'm cruel) but you can definitely understand the logic in the story. Albeit, I did get surprised by some of the development in the earlier chapters, but later on they made sense Character Design The Blank State MC. It's the Asian man who likes to play games, stays indoors and whatnot. Now this is not such a bad thing, it's intentional, and we did get glimpses into his personality. You'd no doubt agree with his convictions per se on how he decides his fate naturally World Background Somewhat interwoven with the story, and if you've read the synopsis. We have a powerful goblin that brings our protagonist to his world to save their race :3 There's a little more to it, but you'll have to read it yourself I'm a little biased with the 5 star ratings, and yet I'm not particularly a nitpicky person. I genuinely enjoyed this book <3 Glad I found this one while I was procrastinating lol. Give it a try my friend~!

The_Procrastinator
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