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Jo_J
Jo_JLv133yrJo_J

Wow!!! Stunning cover page! Very original and catchy. I miss in the synopsis a few more sentences (about the plot and the main character). From the beginning of the story, I can see that you have a concept for the whole plot, but inside there some things (like short explanations, descriptions that would give more light to the plot and characters, etc.) are missing. In general, you're doing great!

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Maze of the Forgotten Masters

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SeverusMagicus
SeverusMagicusAuthorSeverusMagicus

You are so right about the improvements, thanks for your help Jo_j!

3yr
SeverusMagicus
SeverusMagicusAuthorSeverusMagicus

Thanks I will try to fix them as much as possible. Have a nice day.

3yr
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Jo_J
Jo_JLv13Jo_J

You're welcome. I hope I help a little... ;)

SeverusMagicus:Thanks I will try to fix them as much as possible. Have a nice day.
3yr
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Jo_J
Jo_JLv13Jo_J

Don't think about quantity, just quality. When you have 30-40 chapters, it's much harder to improve/edit/correct (I know, from the autopsy)

SeverusMagicus:You are so right about the improvements, thanks for your help Jo_j!
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