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The_Puffer
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2022-04-20 06:38

My only problem is author seems to dropped this. This was such a good story. I love this authors novels. I Hope he update storyi the near future altough its been a year since the last chapter. Maybe he is sharing it on another platform?

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0_Jordinio_0
0_Jordinio_0Author

I've not, I'm waiting om Volume 9 coming out.

Thewatcher
ThewatcherLv4

Since volume 9 is out now, are you gonna pick this story back up again? Or did something change your plans? I hope not, this is the first of your stories that I read and hope that it gets finished.

0_Jordinio_0:I've not, I'm waiting om Volume 9 coming out.
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