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Overall, a pretty bland story and totalled at 1.4/5. The most interesting thing about it, is the characters mouth, that's it. And I guess it has a decent update speed. Overall though? Completely forgettable. There is completely zero of description, whole parts of combat are wrote off as 'he tried, but was blocked'. It's all over the pace. So 1/5 character design. Story development? What development? It's just rehashing canon, with the mc in the lime light when he's weak as as piss, and doing a piss poor job of conveying the emotion that was at least there in the original, instead if's just all about the mc's mouth. And the world background ties into both of those, so 1/5. Which is why I also put the writing quality as a 1/5. The story is completely un-engaging. And let's talk about the mc. He went on about how he'd been training for years, since he was a young boy. His strength stat at the beginning, was 9. An average grown mans was around ten. Even when it's over one hundred, he can only by his own words lift a motorcycle. Izuku went from noodle to being able to lift a small 1 ton mini truck up to the top of a trash pile in a year. So clearly Izuku's strength was like two hundred or something without One For All. Even with all his apparent training from a young age, and a system helping him to boost levels and his strength, he's still weaker than quirkless Izuku who trained a year. Honestly, disappointed at first I thought I found something good, only to get this. That's what I get for getting my hopes up on this website. Albeit, it's still better than most of trashy slop on this website.

....You tried? Tried what? How about some bloody description?

How does he know everything going on around him? This is just bad writing dude. And how does he even know who Mei Hatsume is?

So weaker than Izuku then? Cuz after his training arc in canon he lifted a small truck up to the top of a huge trash pile. God this dude sucks.

Got taken down. I'm on subscribestar now.

No, just peeps haven't voted for it to be continued in a while.

A good few inches above anyone in the konoha 12. And Neji is 5'8, do with that what you will.

Well, I was at least before Pa--atr--eon fucked me lmao.

I already did, with a tortoise.

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