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0_Jordinio_0Author4yr
2021-01-09 21:32

Well, you know it, you love it. It's the tried and true moth of giving your own story a perfect rating wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooga, let's do it boys!

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ONGFRFR
ONGFRFRLv4

what is the first book called cause i cant find it?

0_Jordinio_0
0_Jordinio_0Author

There isn't one. starts from there.

ONGFRFR:what is the first book called cause i cant find it?
DragonkingKyo
DragonkingKyoLv6

what is second person point of view? only ever hear of first or third person

dontenglish
dontenglishLv5

its a combination of first an third person

DragonkingKyo:what is second person point of view? only ever hear of first or third person
ONGFRFR
ONGFRFRLv4

really? i feel like this is a part 2, its really good tho keep it up

0_Jordinio_0:There isn't one. starts from there.
dontenglish
dontenglishLv5

do you have link to your charecter because i cant find him when i look him up i only find a guy from season seven

0_Jordinio_0
0_Jordinio_0Author

He's an oc.

dontenglish:do you have link to your charecter because i cant find him when i look him up i only find a guy from season seven
Thesoultaker88
Thesoultaker88Lv5

Author i have some questions before i start reading and those are 1)will mc love his harem and 2)will there be drama 3) Will mc care for his harem members and last 4) will mc harem follow him

0_Jordinio_0
0_Jordinio_0Author

Yes, a little bit, yes and yes.

Thesoultaker88:Author i have some questions before i start reading and those are 1)will mc love his harem and 2)will there be drama 3) Will mc care for his harem members and last 4) will mc harem follow him
Rimurutruedragon
RimurutruedragonLv4

author is neo goin to be in the harem

OhhhhNooo
OhhhhNoooLv10

Your photo make’s you look like a washed up celebrity. Just needed to get that of my shoulder don’t mind me.

0_Jordinio_0:Yes, a little bit, yes and yes.
0_Jordinio_0
0_Jordinio_0Author

Better than I thought I looked at least.

OhhhhNooo:Your photo make’s you look like a washed up celebrity. Just needed to get that of my shoulder don’t mind me.
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QuestionableReadin
QuestionableReadinLv4

Heya, author, did you drop the book?

Memester_Damon
Memester_DamonLv15

Author is it possible to create this exact novel but in first person I personally don't like 2nd person novels but if not that's fine me glossing over this book affects neither of us. Its honestly my fault for my personal preference.

IdioticBaka
IdioticBakaLv4

dude, your fics are great but the ones with the second perspective is a little wierd... like it just doesnt suit your skill. why not do it in third or first perpective? its guaranteed to attract more readers cuz youd be surprised by how many people finds second perspective fics. im not criticising or anything, just some personal opinion of mine that could maybe help you. anyway, great fic as usual and the smut is golden!👍

_NorthStar_
_NorthStar_Lv14

is this still getting updated or is it dropped don't want jump into it only to find out these gonna be no more, your fic's get me too attached for that.

0_Jordinio_0
0_Jordinio_0Author

It's my main Rwby project. I'm just not in a rwby mood right now. It'll happen though. It always returns.

_NorthStar_:is this still getting updated or is it dropped don't want jump into it only to find out these gonna be no more, your fic's get me too attached for that.
Chris_Matte
Chris_MatteLv4

A Blazing Fist more please...... and maybe mc can get companion ability like taming but allow bring people with affection or aprecation over 75 to other worlds with him ?? he can start with 2 slots and get +1 for each new world, he does not have to use them just an idea, also he could then choose to give some points to companions so they can buy perks in new worlds or atleast get minimal affinity with the special aspect of that world so maybe spend 1000 point on randomization companion will apear in world with 1-2 abilities and a couple perks then mc would have to go looking for them and all the fun things (trouble "cough cough") that they could have gotten into ... 😉

0_Jordinio_0:It's my main Rwby project. I'm just not in a rwby mood right now. It'll happen though. It always returns.
_NorthStar_
_NorthStar_Lv14

Good on ya... T_T binged it all last night, I eagerly await more however long it takes.

0_Jordinio_0:It's my main Rwby project. I'm just not in a rwby mood right now. It'll happen though. It always returns.
99SLaYeR99
99SLaYeR99Lv4

so when are you updating yugioh fanfiction on fanfiction.com?

0_Jordinio_0:It's my main Rwby project. I'm just not in a rwby mood right now. It'll happen though. It always returns.
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Standoda
StandodaLv1

Finally a rwby FF that seems original! Ans actually well writen as well ! chapter are a bit on the short side but that means they come quicker (no dick pun intended) it's a bit risky and daring to do a rwby FF that starts at the fall of beacon but at least we are spared the same S1,2,3, shenanigans that we saw so many times we can nearly recite them ourselves! It gives a lot of change from usual with a intersting character being one of the coolest grimm around. Also author you and your MC must be after my own heart doing a rwby harem story and have a MC that goes for our favorite australian rabbit girl... And with Neo in cover while cuping a feel on Emerald you only need to tear the BellaBooty away from the claws of that useless SSJ rip-off and forced sexuality change to please the community to make me a happy new fan! More seriously you really seem like a man of culture if your first chapter and book image are foreshadowing in any way doing a working and risked but intersting RWBY harem story with Velvet and Neo (and Blake man of culture ya'know) as first galz i'm already liking you! A counsel just don't make a harem too gigantic don't need 20 girls to make it work just some good Velvet cake, Neo-cream, Bellabooty, Sustrai with maybe some Yang or some Rubes, and a fill of Malachite, Sienha or Aslan to spice it up and we are already perfect! dunno if you are saving pyrrha at that point but IMO if ya do keep arkos going it doesn't make much sense if spartagirl fall for a lion just cuz it used cinder as a scratchpost Friendily from another man of culture (the good one!) ps: don't forget in flying battles if the enemy is behind.... DO A BARRELROLL!!

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