Honestly? I had already thought about doing a review when I had only 40 chapters, but I waited and hoped to release more so I could give an opinion. Overall, the idea of the work is good and that I do not deny, the work had a huge potential and could have been absolutely incredible. But unfortunately that’s not the case here. It would be better to change the name of the work to something like: 'Collecting Girls by the Multiverse' or something like that, because the last thing the Protagonist of the work tries to do is kill the Protagonists of the world that he goes to. 'He killed some characters, that should be enough' No. He aims to kill the Protagonist, kill other characters while justifying: 'I’m just getting rid of future problems', while the Protagonist of the work (Ichigo) did not even know how to use the Hollow Mask is still just the most pure idiocy. Not to mention that when the Protagonist (in chapter 86) truly believes that he will die, his last thoughts are: 'I only regret not having taken more women'. Really? He already had more than 5 girls and still regrets it instead of regretting being an idiot and growing up? This is the kind of work that readers keep telling each stupid action of the Protagonists the bad points of it and ask the Author to improve, but he simply responds by saying something absurd and worsens the personality of the Protagonist. This message may well seem a message of pure hatred, but unfortunately it is the purest truth about the Work. I understand you’re not paid to write this, but honestly? At least try to listen to the opinion of the Readers and improve, so that in the future you can try to gain something with the work. Not counting the personality of the characters, it is completely opposite to the original work. As I said in chapter 86, I’m just not leaving the work because I have nothing else to read. ( And I sincerely hope that you do not delete this message, Author. )
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LIKEWe won't delete this we never do. We don't delete honest reviews. That is your point of view you are allowed to have one. As long as you don't come to the review section insulting everything you see. And ffs stop talking like we delete all of the negative reviews... Scroll down there is a lot of negative reviews. We want new reader to have an idea of what they will get into. What we don't want is people who exaggerate things like this is the worst thing that ever existed and they are gettin brain cancer from reading this... Like we get it you don't like it just say I don't like it I don't recommend it. If they did so we would let their comments in since we have nothing againts it. However people who talk like we have been rude to them and make a big scene out of things.... That is something annoying to deal with. The only thing we ask on a review is for you to be honest and for you to have some respect there is no need to say that you have brain cancer from reading this or that u get mental decieses from reading this... Just say you don't like because of this and that we understand. Not talking about you just telling you to stop exaggerating about us removing reviews. So far we have only removed 3 in which one of them had racism. Hope to have cleared that out. Peace out
Are you a Co author in this or a Web novel moderator/administrator? You speak with such a close heart concerning the topic that there must be some truth on the things you tell. Deleted reviews have happened before on this page there is no denying that what is left is accepting that unpleasantness,part of the measures taken were justified(like you say because readers throw insults left and right,prejudices involving certain cultures,racism or homophobia etc...society really is reflected on this little page) but others were simply people with more power than they deserved on their hands that simply run unchecked. Do not really know if this story will be saved on a few months from the great evil that is censorship but I certainly hope so. It really surprises me to hear someone openly admitting that is involved on the reading and casting judgement on the reviews,honestly thought the process for all of that was simply left unchecked on web novel so nice to know.
I don't know if you are making fun of me or supporting me. There are two ways to intrepert what you said. Either you said it with sarcasm or you are being honest. Why are you making it sound like I am censoring the press? There are some comments that don't deserve to be in the reviews sections since they either directly insult the author or his nationality. A review is where you are supposed to say what you think about the novel to new readers not to attack the author and the people who made this fanfic. No I am not a webnovel administrator I highly doubt this website has such a thing. People can just say whatever the hell they want without facing any problems. I am the editor on this novel and yes normaly I read the comments and I take ideas from them since people on this website are actually really creative. I don't support censorship in any way however on this case considering that the website doesn't really care... And the report button existes as a decorative button... So yeah we don't really have that much of a choise.
Wow man my comment was honest do not need to react so strongly you really are full of tension,gotcha that there is much toxicity and asshole around these parts but relax. If you are tasked with reading reviews and taking note of the thoughts of the readers it is inevitable that you will find some reviews that have no sense of property,people read on this site and this mean of course that many evils of today's life are transported into the comments. As I said before yeah I support tracking down any contributions that only bring hate,lies and dishonesty yet giving you are also a person with your own opinions some matters can fall straight on a subjective/sensible interpretation. As long as you don't cross that line and are not moved by petty reasons such as anger,a developing grudge against one of the critics or in general your personal problems while going through the comment and review section,you'll have no dissatisfaction concerning your appointed role around here. Also gotta recognise you that it take some bravery and perpha** masochism to reveal one's role so openly on the commonity,I know many that act anonymously and cast their decisions with a silent voice. Good luck fending off against all the unpleasant environment of the page been reading reviews myself to decide if I give the story a try so it might be a possibility!
OK dude thank you for the support. I am sorry if it sounded aggressive it wasn't my intention.
Also if you don't mind dude could you answers some general questions regarding the story see it as somewhat of a promotion to get me to read it as I am a little unsure of its quality,it is also quite interesting to see the creators involved do some self constructive criticism themselves. 1.What is your favourite character on PK(no worries about spoilers as I suppose all of them already come from other animes or fandom in general)Why? 2.Does the MC go through some kind of character development can you say that he has the same mentality and goals as the very start,has he learnt on a personal something worthy beyond several techniques and physical progress?What kind of archetype does the MC fulfil on your opinion(anti-hero,antagonist,a totally grey and human character with as many flaws as virtues)? 3.Does it jump straight to *** on an hilarious way(as many smut books do) or does it develop the relationship between the cast on a satisfying way before jumping to the act? 4.Could you tell me what you consider has been handled best on the story? 5.What is your honest opinion of what you and the Writer have uploaded so far? 6.Does the story feel different from others that have the similar premise on WN? 7.What do you personally think needs improvement so far?
OK I don't mind doing it. I will not give you full details about everything since there is 80 chapters of content. However I can give you a general idea about what you are gonna read. So for starters me and the author are rookies in the art of writing and making fanfics. The first few chapters there where some plot holes and a couple mistakes in the history writing. This was our first time it was bound to happen. The first smut happens around the 30+ chapter from the next like 20 chapters there is a lot of smut since the mc gets addicted to it. However to compensate we did an arc with 20 chapters that is full of fighting. We didn't create a perfect mc he makes mistakes and he pays penalties for it (this triggers some people). In the middle of the novel the mc will lose his mind since there is something that is messing with his mind. In the future this fanfic will include some kingdom building with a lot of wars. Yes the mc will **** a lot of women we will try to keep those characters as loyal as possible. This is the good parts. However there is also a lot of bad parts like we didn't do a proper character development and we made some mistakes on the characters. The mc in the first chapters has pretty much no character development however in the future he will. At least rhat is what we are sticking for. Please read this novel with a bit of salt since it's our first one and it ain't perfect. Hope you enjoy it if you decide to read it
That was quite helpful man thank you for your patience and honesty,I'll check it soon so good luck with the future if the story!
Are you Japanese?