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Well this was the mandatory smut we get it, Suki whole not the greatest does leave an impression.
Her being the first girl we meet in this story and all would be extra hot.
I suppose mainly because they like Charlie as a character specially compared to Reene and want to do some justice to the poor treatment he received from Bella during the series.
Such a great reading! Wish you all the best dear writer keep up the quality please.
Of course you were owed an educated and civilised response at the very least. Honestly? I would try creating an original setting similar to HOTD but with its own peculiarities,it is a vastly exploited scenario and putting/honing your talents as a writers with your own content is always far better than keep toying with overwatched animes. Nevertheless no matter what you decide,proops to you for actually reading the reviews and learning from them like a good writer should.
A-Orphanage I want more of Shinji's background and learn more about the circunstances he had while growing up,perphaps some family hints?Show us the roos of the hero! Also the quest/story is really cool though Iam surprised to find something like this on Webnovel as this is more SV/SB/QQ' s domain.
The question was oriented more to how does the new characters heigh compare to Komachi's?The MC is more developed than the original Hachi that also reflects on how tall he is yes?
How tall is Komachi then compared to new Hikki?
Loved the Ayame chapters! Give us more of her every now and then specially when Boruto gathers all the harem members.
Heh cannot help but love greedy protagonists. "And then his pupils turned into golden coins"