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Culture_Lover
Culture_LoverLv123yr
2021-03-05 01:32

my honest opinion on the novel, please don't be offended: The first chapters in the hollow world was a good thing, but when we arrived in the human world everything changed for the worse (at least for me) I know that they do not receive money for this work and they do it just for fun, but wanting to write about some characters like yoruichi or kisuke without even having consideration for their basic personality and forcing a plot so simple that it does not express some love for writing makes the quality of the novel drop very low, I know that in webnovel there are not many good novels, but you The idea is really good, if it had been different you could have had a lot of support I think. Thank you

Protagonist Killer

Dereck_Oliveira
4.5
130 Chs

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Dereck_Oliveira
Dereck_OliveiraAuthor

Thanks for your honest review. :)

3yr
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Nero_Kaslana
Nero_KaslanaLv2

Quando vai sair mais

3yr
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unknown_daoist
unknown_daoistLv14

First of all, im will start this novel in 10mins, but wanted to read a few reviews again..... so i got a question, cant u just think about the worlds as a parallel one to the original, which would explain the changes in the personalities???? You make your own life hard, with grieving over a free story.... just saying my opinion, dont take it to heart :D

3yr
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Culture_Lover
Culture_LoverLv12

calm bro, no problem: D As for why my criticism, it is not because I am someone demanding, since most of the fanfics are not works of art (besides that they are free) my criticism is directed to the most basic of the plot, I have read things very absurd, worse at least there they give even some "personality" to their characters, here yoruichi, kisuke and the rest were really flat, without reasoning and almost robotic, unless it is a parallel world of stupid characters, no I would find another explanation

unknown_daoist:First of all, im will start this novel in 10mins, but wanted to read a few reviews again..... so i got a question, cant u just think about the worlds as a parallel one to the original, which would explain the changes in the personalities???? You make your own life hard, with grieving over a free story.... just saying my opinion, dont take it to heart :D
3yr
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Lize
LizeLv13

well.... actually the problem here is not really in their personality.. but the situation.. its just you forced it too hard.. im dissapointed............. considering how high the star is........ 😞😞😞😞😞

unknown_daoist:First of all, im will start this novel in 10mins, but wanted to read a few reviews again..... so i got a question, cant u just think about the worlds as a parallel one to the original, which would explain the changes in the personalities???? You make your own life hard, with grieving over a free story.... just saying my opinion, dont take it to heart :D
3yr
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Yawgmoth
YawgmothLv5

that s why they need such a revealing image of matsumoto on their cover^^

2yr
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Nero_Kaslana
Nero_KaslanaLv2

Saudades mano miss you bro

Dereck_Oliveira:Thanks for your honest review. :)
2yr
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FBI_Nothis04
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as many reviewers have stated before me the first half of the chapters are brutaly good (my opinion) and had potential to be one of the best fanfics on this site, the thing that changed my view was the lemon part of the story, don't get me wrong I'm a lemon lover like most readers here but in this case, at least for me, it worsened the story, many characters feel fake, as if they were automated s-exdolls with powers, I still read it but I have to admit that I will surely drop the moment the mc's objetive in bleach dies, I made this review with my personal opinion and preferences in mind so give it a try you might like it (especially if you love op battlejukie and extremely lusty mc's)also thanks to the author for making it.

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JaxWolf4
JaxWolf4Lv4

I don't really know how to feel about this fanfic. It is good for the most part, but a lot of the story feels extremely forced. WQ - Few grammar errors. SoU - Frequent updates so far. SD - Decent but it is being sort of rushed. CD - The MC is a bland OP hollow and needs some more development. WB - Decent so far, it is following canon bleach, so nothing wrong here. Overall it is a decent fanfic if you don't mind the forced parts of the story. 3.8 stars.

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AntiLoliLewdingLv4

Okay the story was okay, the prospects were so high but it was when the MC went into the human world where things took a deep dive. The characters feel one-sided, and the women have little to no development. The smut is excessive, and sometimes annoying. It had the chance to be better, seeing as how the term protagonist doesn't entirely mean hero. Overall, it was good, until the MC started to act like a horndog. I'll still be reading it since the author might listen to me but what do I know?

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