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Zerga3
Zerga3Lv123yr
2021-03-31 08:58

Since I have read almost all available chapters, I am obligated to write a review. Writing quality - I have no complains, there are no grammatical errors and flow is good(5 stars) Update stability - 14chaps/week. (5stars) Story development - so far it’s hard to judge, but considering all the mysteries the author has been giving us, it should be interesting. Until now, I like the way the story goes with the mc turning more into antihero, who still keeps his natural emotions.(5stars) Character development - that’s the place author did a great a job. The reader can clearly see the change in mc’s character.(5 stars) World background - Although I am still quite confused about the power system, but I am sure it will be explained more intently in the latter chaps(5 stars as well) The story is great and I love it so far. It’s definitely better than 99% of the Wn books. Btw the new cover is bomb.

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The_Starters
The_StartersLv1

when will the mc falls in love!!??

HGB
HGBLv1

in 250ish chapters? Only the author knows, but from how the story is progressing right now this is my best estimate.

The_Starters:when will the mc falls in love!!??
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xxReedxx
xxReedxxLv3

Review based on what i have read so far ( chapter 60+) It's my personal opinion so if you have anything against on what I'm going to say you can write your own review 1. the world background- can't say much since the story is in early stage. So far I like how the author described the world setting, events and characters interaction. 2. pacing of the story- as a reader, personally, i feel like the author did a great job regulating this. It's not so slow where you'll be skipping words for unwanted fillers. It's not so fast where you'll feel like you missed out something. It's the best a reader can ask for, we'll, aside from the cliffhangers. 3. MC's character development- looking at things the way they progressed. His character development is understandable for me, for short i like the way the mc progress. He's a bit edgy at times, it's expected given how he lived his life up to this point. Hoping there will be some progress between him and a certain someone, i will not give a name but she's very likeable. 4. MC's system- there are not much interaction between the mc and the system unlike other novels. It has its own advantages for the mc just like every other mc, but it's not up to the point where i will call it OP. MC still has to do his part to gain something. 5. Characters surrounding the mc- they are not plain to read. They have their own depth and mystery that will make you want to know more about them. Of course, we can't forget about the stepping stones for our mc, some of them are stupid as usual while some are smart and think for themselves when to back out- unlike the stupid ones. The mc is ruthless and i like it, im not really into naive and goody-two-shoes kind. Realistically speaking, if you look at every great person at the top in our current world despite their different attitudes they all have similarities if you study them. Yes they act and do good things to look good in front of us but is that really there is? No, i think not, they're just good at hiding their worse side from our plain eyes. Every person at the top knew both the black and white of life. As what Niccolo Machiavelli said "a wise prince should be both fear and love".

PoeticSonic
PoeticSonicLv4

grammer, maybe a few here and there, English isn't my first language nor am i too proficient so as long as it's readable and fluid then i really don't care for the small mistakes so 5/5. character design, the character design is dog shit. it's too bad, even most eastern fantasy novels aren't that bad, i don't even know where to start...actually i do, i will start from the very first few paragraphs. the author starts with a "glimpse" of the future of how in 3 years the MC is gonna be op and guess what the people chant his name as? they call him "crimson lord" dude, the cringe level was so high it covered me like a coat, it would have been ironically less edgy if the people chanted "edge lord" lmao. he took the "im trash so i get abused and bullied" way too fuken far and he didn't give valid excuses yet. forget committing suicide, I'm surprised that he's alive, and for someone as "trash" as him, why does everybody put so much energy into torturing him and putting him an inch away from life and their lives revolve around it like wtf?! also, the author like to tell rather than show, he says that the mc is smart but the mc keeps on doing dumb and stupid things. when it comes to other characters, if they aren't literally trying to kill the mc ust because he has a "trash" power, they are shitting on him about why he still didn't kill himself. and all of them are very obnoxious like holy shit, i would have killed myself whether i have a strong or weak power by virtue of me having to hear these people talk on a daily basis. that goes for the system too, it's annoying as ****. overall 3/5 just cuz i think there is potential for the story and i don't want to lower the rating too much stability...well it's pretty stable let's hope it stays that way, for now, there haven't been too many chapters.5/5 story development, i like the fact that it's gonna have to do with space soon enough and meeting new species so on and so forth and that's mostly where the 4 starts to come from, i took only 1 star which is something very generous as what we saw in the first chapter as a glimpse to the future was hella cringe but i can see many ways the author can improve upon it so by the time it's the period where the glimpse of the future showed, he could change things so it isn't as cringe. also, the story is very very forced, like a constipated person trying to take a shit.

TimVic
TimVicAuthor

Almost three hundred chapters have been published at the time of writing this review. Spoiler alert: I will like to give a breakdown of our journey so far. From 1 - 150+ was volume one. These chapters contained scenes of the MC's growth, both in abilities as well as character. You may like or dislike his character sometimes when reading because character development is was kind of constant. So based on the situation he may change a little. Things might not have been executed in the best way possible in terms of breaking down explanations that were written in later chapters. This was done to prevent info dumps and fillers. Everything unexplained was later explained in the future chapters without a single detail omitted. The next volume which is currently ongoing has several mini-arcs. The first mini-arc was just concluded. It comprised of the MBO entrance test as well as a few scenes giving explanations to things that happened during the six weeks time skip. Also, a few scenes showing us happenings outside of the MBO test arc were included. The test arc went on for longer than I intended. Some readers that might feel the need to skip scenes to find explanations on the kitchen accident as well as what happened during the six weeks time jump, can head to chapter 294. I've written side stories where everything that was skipped in the past chapters was tabled out in scenes. After the side chapters, we will continue with the current storyline which leads on to Gustav's life within the MBO camp. For new and old readers, Chapters 1 - 161 are being edited to give you all a better reading experience. Thank you all for the support so far. Peace out ✌️ -TimVic

whatwhatintheworld
whatwhatintheworldLv15

For referenece, im currently on chapter 89 out of 730ish. I feel like I've read enough to get the general vibe of the novel. So far, I have a lot of mixed feelings about this novel. I'm going to list my pro's and con's and if I don't drop this I'll come back and update this review. Pros: - Unlike other system novels, the system doesn't baby the protagonist. He has to figure thing out himself for the most part, which is refreshing. - The bloodline powers are really unique so far and I really like how his initial power was upgraded to something useful but not incredibly op. Hopefully the power scaling for him isn't to crazy and he doesnt bulldoze through everything later on. Cons: - Everyone from his parents to his classmates are cartoonishly evil. It seems like 90% of the characters in this novel are there so protag has a reason to act edgy and think the worlds against him. For example, I can understand his younger brother acting like a brat and cursing him at every moment because hes a child but his mother doing the same makes no sense in my opinion. If author wanted a "cold/abusive" parent making them treat protag like air/ being extremely distant would make more sense. Instead his mother also reads like an annoying brat despite being an adult...Same thing with school mates. It would have been more believable if only the main 3 bullies in the beginning were after him and everyone else was just distant and cold. - The protag is way to edgy are certain points. For example, I have no idea why he treats FL horribly from the moment they meet. Its not like they have a bad history, he just seems to hate her for no real reason. I couldn't understand why he slams the door in her face on there second or third meeting...You think since everyone else is so aggressively mean to him he would appreciate who ever is nice to him. Author says its for characters development but an explanation on why hes so edgy in these types of situations is needed for this to even be remotely believable.

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