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YesTer
YesTerLv23yr
2021-07-27 11:29

Loved this fanfiction! But might I add to spice things up a bit for two reasons? One, you have greatly underpowered the main cast of fairy tail, even at the start when Meliodas' power has diminished greatly, so I'm hoping that you will make the cast catch up to him in some way. And two, it's related to the first reason, the plot has become predictable like MGA; the cast fight a strong villain, they get injured but not a fatal one, and Meliodas comes up with "Sate, sate, sate~" then fights said villain in an overpowered manner, leaving both the cast and villain in awe. Once again, just like in MGA, which had a ton of potential only to be destroyed by the series of cliches. Don't get me wrong, I loved this fanfiction and hope the author would continue this, but I hope this won't become like MGA.

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ShayZero
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Yeah I followed a lot of the Overpowered main character trope with putting Meliodas in there. They'll get a lot of catch up later on. Also, what is MGA?

YesTer
YesTerLv2

Martial God Asura. It was honestly a good xianxia, with a lot of potentials, but it became bad due to its number of cliches and they keep dragging the plot. Anyway, I'm looking forward to more chapters, keep up the good work!

ShayZero:Yeah I followed a lot of the Overpowered main character trope with putting Meliodas in there. They'll get a lot of catch up later on. Also, what is MGA?
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Writing Quality: Nothing much to say here. The writing is good. Story Development: The story is well-planned and the plot feels well-integrated with the story. The author does stick to canon but it's quite common to do so, so can't say much there. I must admit, the beginning will be bit awkward for non-manga readers as they have no fking clue what is going on, but that's a minor problem. All they should have to know is: Elizabeth is no longer cursed, Meliodas's friends have to fight a random OP organism, and Meliodas got yeeted across space by the said creature that can pretty much manipulate the world. Character Design: Eh... nothing much to say about physical characteristics since these are all manga/anime characters. There has been a few OCs but they are described fairly well and really just depends on whether the readers can remember them or not. The power scaling for Meliodas does feel "off" at times but that's just a minor complaint. Updating Stability: Pretty good as far as I can tell, there has been a fairly consistent rate of 1 chap/day. World Background: Again this is straight from the anime/manga so there isn't much to say. But even when Meliodas was sent somewhere "new" (original), the surroundings were well described. Personal Opinion: Although I do feel kind of squirmish with how nerfed Meliodas is, I do think this is a good novel and would recommend anyone to read it. There are some spoilers from either the author or the readers but that's a minor problem. (Escanor dies, for whoever doesn't know. 😈😈😈)

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