Shameless author review. Been working on this story since summer of 2020. Almost everything except the final arc is outlined. In terms of things being written out, there are rough drafts of up to the end of the Oracion Seis arc. Expecting over 200 chapters with this novel.

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I've read to the current chapters, RN theirs 34 out, The build up is getting good. But I gotta say tho is the OC's really needed for this Facfic? I know that Mel is OPAF but are the OC's really that needed? Anyways, as far as I have read it's quite good, There haven't been much of stuff the piqued my interest this past months but this got mine ^^

I like Meliodas here. He's nerfed to fit in with everyone else but he retains that Meliodas charm. My only complaint: Needs more sate sate sate

5 star review for putting no harem please if anyone is going to make a novel and reads this please no harem popularise no harem, no harem jutsu. just imagine the cringe you writing about you and your 5 wives having *** if your friends found out you wouldn't be able to leave ur house think about and don't make a harem, no harem for life

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Writing Quality: Nothing much to say here. The writing is good. Story Development: The story is well-planned and the plot feels well-integrated with the story. The author does stick to canon but it's quite common to do so, so can't say much there. I must admit, the beginning will be bit awkward for non-manga readers as they have no fking clue what is going on, but that's a minor problem. All they should have to know is: Elizabeth is no longer cursed, Meliodas's friends have to fight a random OP organism, and Meliodas got yeeted across space by the said creature that can pretty much manipulate the world. Character Design: Eh... nothing much to say about physical characteristics since these are all manga/anime characters. There has been a few OCs but they are described fairly well and really just depends on whether the readers can remember them or not. The power scaling for Meliodas does feel "off" at times but that's just a minor complaint. Updating Stability: Pretty good as far as I can tell, there has been a fairly consistent rate of 1 chap/day. World Background: Again this is straight from the anime/manga so there isn't much to say. But even when Meliodas was sent somewhere "new" (original), the surroundings were well described. Personal Opinion: Although I do feel kind of squirmish with how nerfed Meliodas is, I do think this is a good novel and would recommend anyone to read it. There are some spoilers from either the author or the readers but that's a minor problem. (Escanor dies, for whoever doesn't know. 😈😈😈)

almost read it the idea was good but then the authour had too introduce unnecessary characters im giving a bad review just because you introduced unnecessary oc's. it gave me a good hype before destroying it with the additions