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Future_XLv23yr
2021-01-26 00:53

I think that author is taking the story in a good direction and so far (Ch 32) uptil what I have read, author is doing a great job. I can also there haven't been cliche movement uptil now, which I really like it bcs there are many other fan fic where i have noticed that after 3 to 5 chapter MC will start doing stupid things or MC will go after a girl to help or any other stuff. I am not good at explaining things so I am sorry if can't understand me. Now back to the topic, this is great fan fic compared to many others and I also like one of part that author is trying to create or take the story into good direction and also there is "No Harem" for which I am very pleased.Because If by any chance author would have written the story by putting harem into it then I Fucking swear that i would have given 1 star review, bcs we all know that how much Meliodas love Elizabeth. And Author bro I have a suggestion that you should write a chapter about Meliodas backstory which you have told in Ch 1, why cath killed all of meliodas friends and when you have written about Cath and Meliodas fight scene then why Meliodas didn't use his True Magic Form to fight cath. That's all. I recommend to all to read this novel.... Thank You!!

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