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ShayZero
ShayZeroAuthor4yr
2021-01-08 10:07

Shameless author review. Been working on this story since summer of 2020. Almost everything except the final arc is outlined. In terms of things being written out, there are rough drafts of up to the end of the Oracion Seis arc. Expecting over 200 chapters with this novel.

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Derpy_Bird
Derpy_BirdLv14

its always good to hear that a novel has an actual plan and your not just winging it to glory, have a meat clown for your hard work!

Rano_Figo
Rano_FigoLv2

what about your another novel?

ShayZero
ShayZeroAuthor

That one was made on the spot. Spent less than a week planning and then jumped right in. Probably won't continue it for now but even if I did, a complete overhaul/reboot of it would be better.

Rano_Figo:what about your another novel?
BigBangOrko
BigBangOrkoLv14

but it had a nice concept

ShayZero:That one was made on the spot. Spent less than a week planning and then jumped right in. Probably won't continue it for now but even if I did, a complete overhaul/reboot of it would be better.
Tushar_Vashishta
Tushar_VashishtaLv13

is there romance in it????

InternetDaiii
InternetDaiiiLv4

YES YES YES!!!

Safiya_NM
Safiya_NMLv2

no, the mc is meliodas, what do you expect? he is head over heels for Elizabeth and her alone.

Tushar_Vashishta:is there romance in it????
Safiya_NM
Safiya_NMLv2

author:

AnDrixo
AnDrixoLv4

heehheheheh

ItsDragonking
ItsDragonkingLv14

pls uppdate Itachi story

ShayZero
ShayZeroAuthor

For those of you wondering about the extra OC's I added at the very beginning, I wanted a substitute for 100 YQ as when I started this novel, 100 YQ had barely any content and it still doesn't have a lot as of this post. Although, looking back, I probably shouldn't even have introduced these OCs until the very end of the novel and just threw in those chapters as a flashback scene.

Daoistk2B27Z
Daoistk2B27ZLv1

Where is new chapter

EpicLink_21
EpicLink_21Lv13

if you

Safiya_NM:no, the mc is meliodas, what do you expect? he is head over heels for Elizabeth and her alone.
Daoistk2B27Z
Daoistk2B27ZLv1

Where is the new chapter?

Shiina_Ma4ro
Shiina_Ma4roLv13

when you will create a new fanfiction on resume Itachi's hiatus

Other Reviews
Timothy_Chann
Timothy_ChannLv1
wolffi
wolffiLv14
Future_X
Future_XLv2
DaoOfCulture
DaoOfCultureLv14

Writing Quality: Nothing much to say here. The writing is good. Story Development: The story is well-planned and the plot feels well-integrated with the story. The author does stick to canon but it's quite common to do so, so can't say much there. I must admit, the beginning will be bit awkward for non-manga readers as they have no fking clue what is going on, but that's a minor problem. All they should have to know is: Elizabeth is no longer cursed, Meliodas's friends have to fight a random OP organism, and Meliodas got yeeted across space by the said creature that can pretty much manipulate the world. Character Design: Eh... nothing much to say about physical characteristics since these are all manga/anime characters. There has been a few OCs but they are described fairly well and really just depends on whether the readers can remember them or not. The power scaling for Meliodas does feel "off" at times but that's just a minor complaint. Updating Stability: Pretty good as far as I can tell, there has been a fairly consistent rate of 1 chap/day. World Background: Again this is straight from the anime/manga so there isn't much to say. But even when Meliodas was sent somewhere "new" (original), the surroundings were well described. Personal Opinion: Although I do feel kind of squirmish with how nerfed Meliodas is, I do think this is a good novel and would recommend anyone to read it. There are some spoilers from either the author or the readers but that's a minor problem. (Escanor dies, for whoever doesn't know. 😈😈😈)

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