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Lol_Man_7331
Lol_Man_7331Lv13yr
2021-01-12 12:25

You know you should do something abosut his memories lol many people hate it but yeahh im okay with that, and u should do more dialogue (my opinion) and be careful when he have a dialogue with young justice member they're all is a youngster that still have a puberty so u should do the dialogue with more 'live' in it. You know what it means right? Teenager have a different personalities Beastbot with his noisy, raven with her ignorance, kid flash that alomost same with beast boy, just make sure do some research of dc character personalities before you write the dialogue. And least: im sorry for my bad english senpai

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TheGodSage
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he gets his memories back kind of... in the latest chapter he watches some of them, it's like he's watching his past life in a tv screen, But yeah I'll make sure to add more dialogue👍

Lol_Man_7331
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Wow, five minutes after i give you a rate and than you just reply it so quick

TheGodSage:he gets his memories back kind of... in the latest chapter he watches some of them, it's like he's watching his past life in a tv screen, But yeah I'll make sure to add more dialogue👍
TheGodSage
TheGodSageAuthor

yah I was reading when I got the notification so I came and read it👌

Lol_Man_7331:Wow, five minutes after i give you a rate and than you just reply it so quick
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