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2022-04-27 20:21

(SPOILER WARNING) I really can't get past the first few chapters since every time he meets someone new he instantly get's away with something, for batman he stole 120k and said "It's for my mother who's suffering from cancer" and batman thought "Either way this is probably stolen," and did nothing about it. He met Raven after eating a human, and he said "I'm kind of like you" and she immediately joined him, He told catwoman that he needs to eat humans and she gets over it in 1 sentence, he gave her basically the lore of ghouls, telling her what he needs to eat and what he can't eat, mind you he's not even 12 at this point there's no reason for him to know everything when he just became a ghoul (He ate her food before but the one time hi didn't he suddenly became a ghoul and somehow figured out he could eat dead bodies and coffee) The interactions are so fast that the story is basically trash, there's no substance to the story and I honestly can't get into it. I read a review asking if this was harem and the author replied with what i believe to be a yes considering one was saying "nice" and the other said "why a harem, it ruins the story" I haven't seen any novels about ghouls(from tokyo ghoul) and I'm disappointed with how much of a wreck this is. Before I forget, author i don't care what your opinion on my review is, be it positive or negative.

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thanks for saving me from this trash

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thanks for warning me

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