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This story is great. It starts good and becomes even better the more you read. This is really well written, grammar is extremely good, good character development and well thought out plot. One of the best harem stories and just five stars, doesn't do it justice. The updates are daily, at least one chapter and sometimes three. Extremely good job author. Can't wait to see more more chapters and when you finish this story your next novel.

I really like this fic but since he will be world hopping can you make 1 or 2 girls per world. and will the mc uses skills like iron sand and gold dust from naruto and boruto along with magneto's skills.

the story is somewhat good...now i am in chapter 40 and i seriously hoped for the way of writing to improve.. but it didn't..the story is full of big monologues with little to zero interactions as if telling the summary of a story..it's because of these stories where there is no good using of mc's pov with his monologues full of his rantings, i mostly search for stories with 3rd person pov, cause i find tht far better... i hope the author somehow realises this and try to improve🙄..but we'll the story will be seriously good if this is improved with a lot interactions not only with mc and his family and gf but also with others.

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I liked the overall novel, but the only thing that keeps bothering or rather irritating me is that the few scientific explanations that MC gives about his powers are mostly wrong.... like creating gravitational force using the electromagnetic waves, or him saying that he can create a black hole by mistake just by manipulating the magnetic field of a single city🤦🏼‍♂️, or such similar things. I can't help but doubt how f..ked up can the explanation be..... u should rather not give any scientific logic at all, than writing some BS that is totally wrong🥲. I am just ranting here, don't mind me. Being a science student, I just can't calm down without pointing out these things😅😬.

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No real problems with the story other than the writing quality. The writing quality problem is extremely annoying as it could be solved just by pasting the chapter into word or something. There are 3 common mistakes that the author makes, other than the occasional spelling mistake. 1. Using words like "weren't" and "were" in the wrong situations. Situations that require a "negative" (we didn't do this) sometimes use a "Positive" (we did do this), and vice versa. 2. using the wrong word that sounds the same(there instead of their) or just sounds similar. 3. The most common mistake that the author makes is forgetting to type in a word. This could be any word, from "a" or "us" or "we." This mistake tends to happen (in my experience) due to their typing not keeping up with their thoughts. And not editing.