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GAMING_IS_MUST
GAMING_IS_MUSTLv143yr
2020-12-30 21:27

I seriously don't know why it has such a high rating writing quality is better than mediocre. I seriously don't like the personality of MC don't get me wrong but it seems like he is trying to forcefully act cool. and some things mentioned in the story don't match how the things should be in MHA

In MHA with Star Platinum

blazuki
4.7
191 Chs

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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Because of jojo references! ... .... ..... Sigh, nowadays even long lived jojo community full of degenerates, how sad. Ugh, I am going for touka, at least it's not gotten extremely popular with anime adaptation... And they even have a **** ton of hentai manga, now that's what I am talking!

3yr
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AdrianVeidt
AdrianVeidtLv11

bro what is touka?

Yuri_is_Ntr:Because of jojo references! ... .... ..... Sigh, nowadays even long lived jojo community full of degenerates, how sad. Ugh, I am going for touka, at least it's not gotten extremely popular with anime adaptation... And they even have a **** ton of hentai manga, now that's what I am talking!
3yr
1
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Touhou but I want to trigger someone...

AdrianVeidt:bro what is touka?
3yr
17
CodezL
CodezLLv4

"lee angel" pffff

3yr
1
CruelFlowerDemon
CruelFlowerDemonLv4

...How?

Yuri_is_Ntr:Touhou but I want to trigger someone...
3yr
CruelFlowerDemon
CruelFlowerDemonLv4

By the way, ZUN confirmed there won't be an anime adaptation.

Yuri_is_Ntr:Because of jojo references! ... .... ..... Sigh, nowadays even long lived jojo community full of degenerates, how sad. Ugh, I am going for touka, at least it's not gotten extremely popular with anime adaptation... And they even have a **** ton of hentai manga, now that's what I am talking!
3yr
1
CruelFlowerDemon
CruelFlowerDemonLv4

And yeah, the 16,000 something doujins are a plus too lol.

Yuri_is_Ntr:Because of jojo references! ... .... ..... Sigh, nowadays even long lived jojo community full of degenerates, how sad. Ugh, I am going for touka, at least it's not gotten extremely popular with anime adaptation... And they even have a **** ton of hentai manga, now that's what I am talking!
3yr
2
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

😏

CruelFlowerDemon:And yeah, the 16,000 something doujins are a plus too lol.
3yr
1
AsuraMonarch
AsuraMonarchLv6

My main man, you are on Webnovel, what do you exactly expect?

3yr
Golden_Rain
Golden_RainLv2

What did you expect? He stole a car and spent the time, before bleeding to death, looking a jojo anime! He's an absolute idiot! And Star Platinum... The best Stand is The World, more balanced and with 10m range! And innate Time Control!

3yr
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BAD_MAN
BAD_MANLv5

Yes Yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes.........................................................................................

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Might_Cho
Might_ChoLv14

Reveal spoiler

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Hellside
HellsideLv2

MCxJulia ................. ......................... ............................. ................................ ............................. ............................. .............

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JubayerSiam
JubayerSiamLv5

Story has great potential ..... I just hope author doesn't drop this... & it would be great to give mc some motivation not just make him a guy with power to just live alone

3yr
ThatsClassified
ThatsClassifiedLv11

Kinda scummy Mc who when he cheats on his girlfriend he just continued and said "in only human" 0 remorse and conveniently had his gf decide to share him for basically a bs reason, other stuff is pretty food tho

3yr
DragoPackMan
DragoPackManLv4

writing quality- for me ok story development- like every other mha fanfic with some si opinion character development- didn't see any for now update stability- good world background- mha I don't like mc ( I drop cuz of his character,actions and opinion cya)

3yr
AcidFlame
AcidFlameLv5

The story is good, anything with a JoJo reference is always good in my book. Let alone an actual stand. Only problem is the grammar though. I have to dumb down my reading capabilities in order to even enjoy this. I literally have a headache after reading. *sigh* I hope one day, when the author gets good at writing in english, he/she will rework this fic. Or maybe get an editor/proofreader.

3yr
Eroos
EroosLv13

Friend I have a question, although your answer will not make me stop reading the novel I would love to know it (I hope it is positive cough cough) the protagonist will have something with his mother? I mean, look at her so alone agh a shame sniff sniff

3yr
North670
North670Lv14

The writing quality of this fanfic is pretty bad like you would probably get better grammar if you wrote it in your native language and then used google translate. There is an application called Grammarly that can help you with that. Also, the interactions between characters seem so awkward and forced. One of the most notable examples of this is the police scene which is terrible. Everything else is pretty meh. 3.8/5

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