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North670
North670Lv144yr
2021-01-01 14:43

The writing quality of this fanfic is pretty bad like you would probably get better grammar if you wrote it in your native language and then used google translate. There is an application called Grammarly that can help you with that. Also, the interactions between characters seem so awkward and forced. One of the most notable examples of this is the police scene which is terrible. Everything else is pretty meh. 3.8/5

[Completed] In MHA with Star Platinum

blazuki
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191 Chs

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blazuki
blazukiAuthor

Grammarly was used in fact, and it's not as all amazing as they make it sound.. Well thanks for sharing your opinion.

4yr
blazuki
blazukiAuthor

BTW, I'm using British spelling, in case had you thought some spelling is off. differences are simple, such as: color-colour. Realize-realize...etc

4yr
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Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4

Edit them after using it, or just don't use it if you can write better without it.

blazuki:Grammarly was used in fact, and it's not as all amazing as they make it sound.. Well thanks for sharing your opinion.
4yr
TimeBender
TimeBenderLv1

Grammarly is garbage. I tried it for over a month and the only thing it did was get in my way. Default google docs is way better. Even though you can do both, its only annoying.

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