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North670
North670Lv144yr
2021-01-01 14:43

The writing quality of this fanfic is pretty bad like you would probably get better grammar if you wrote it in your native language and then used google translate. There is an application called Grammarly that can help you with that. Also, the interactions between characters seem so awkward and forced. One of the most notable examples of this is the police scene which is terrible. Everything else is pretty meh. 3.8/5

[Completed] In MHA with Star Platinum

blazuki
4.7
191 Chs

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blazuki
blazukiAuthor

Grammarly was used in fact, and it's not as all amazing as they make it sound.. Well thanks for sharing your opinion.

4yr
blazuki
blazukiAuthor

BTW, I'm using British spelling, in case had you thought some spelling is off. differences are simple, such as: color-colour. Realize-realize...etc

4yr
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Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4

Edit them after using it, or just don't use it if you can write better without it.

blazuki:Grammarly was used in fact, and it's not as all amazing as they make it sound.. Well thanks for sharing your opinion.
4yr
TimeBender
TimeBenderLv1

Grammarly is garbage. I tried it for over a month and the only thing it did was get in my way. Default google docs is way better. Even though you can do both, its only annoying.

3yr
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BAD_MAN
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Yes Yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes.........................................................................................

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Reveal spoiler

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GAMING_IS_MUST
GAMING_IS_MUSTLv14

I seriously don't know why it has such a high rating writing quality is better than mediocre. I seriously don't like the personality of MC don't get me wrong but it seems like he is trying to forcefully act cool. and some things mentioned in the story don't match how the things should be in MHA

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Hellside
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MCxJulia ................. ......................... ............................. ................................ ............................. ............................. .............

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JubayerSiam
JubayerSiamLv5

Story has great potential ..... I just hope author doesn't drop this... & it would be great to give mc some motivation not just make him a guy with power to just live alone

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ThatsClassified
ThatsClassifiedLv11

Kinda scummy Mc who when he cheats on his girlfriend he just continued and said "in only human" 0 remorse and conveniently had his gf decide to share him for basically a bs reason, other stuff is pretty food tho

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DragoPackMan
DragoPackManLv4

writing quality- for me ok story development- like every other mha fanfic with some si opinion character development- didn't see any for now update stability- good world background- mha I don't like mc ( I drop cuz of his character,actions and opinion cya)

4yr
AcidFlame
AcidFlameLv5

The story is good, anything with a JoJo reference is always good in my book. Let alone an actual stand. Only problem is the grammar though. I have to dumb down my reading capabilities in order to even enjoy this. I literally have a headache after reading. *sigh* I hope one day, when the author gets good at writing in english, he/she will rework this fic. Or maybe get an editor/proofreader.

4yr
Eroos
EroosLv13

Friend I have a question, although your answer will not make me stop reading the novel I would love to know it (I hope it is positive cough cough) the protagonist will have something with his mother? I mean, look at her so alone agh a shame sniff sniff

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